Reviews for Betrayal for the Better
Guest chapter 11 . 7/25/2016
pls tell me theres a sequel im really desperate here

pS: if there isn't then can i write it but if you are hurry im desperate
Guest chapter 11 . 7/25/2016
pls tell me theirs a sequel to this if not can i write it
mycatWalter chapter 1 . 2/22/2014
You are a good writer! :3 I like the story a lot!
Wense chapter 10 . 8/16/2013
So who is the real father of mare s kid? I just hope this is the completly hot and amazing Ash Redfern! !
Wense ;)
Wense chapter 11 . 8/16/2013
So, finally, who was the real father of mare's kid. I just hope this is the completly hot and amazing Ash Redfern! !
Wense ;)x)
tonyarena.madru chapter 9 . 3/10/2013
do a sequel !PLZZZ
Guest chapter 11 . 1/3/2013
This story is great, but i miss shin-kicking mary lynette. You should have included that in the earlier chapters
All of the Ships chapter 11 . 4/23/2012
I want to know what happens when is the sequal going to be posted?
NightWorldandRockMusic chapter 11 . 9/24/2011
THOSE BITCHES! Mare and Ash don't deserve that! Although, I must say it makes a wonderful plot. And, as always, your writing is amazing. Also, that title is NOT sucky! I think it would work well. Now, I bid you farewell, to look for the sequel :)

Gingerslytherin chapter 10 . 4/30/2011
love this story cant wait to read the sequel :D xxx
Ahsilaa chapter 1 . 12/23/2010
really good
ChloeLeggatt chapter 11 . 12/17/2010
Omg, i love your story, i cannot believe you havent created your sequel yet please carry this on. i love it completely and was so upset to see the last time ou updated it, i was starting to think there wasnt a sequel. you are an amazing writer too! Please Please PLease Please Create a sequel i beg you!

ChloeMaria 3
Furtively Lethargic chapter 11 . 11/26/2010
OMFG! AWESOME EPILOGUE! I'm SO sorry I hadn't reviewed earlier! I just thought that I already reviewed and read this chapter, but that was a stupid thought. Ahahaha XDDD THOSE BLONDES! THOSE- THOSE- *fumes in freaking anger* . . . no comment. *starts a tantrum* Damn them! Obviously, the kid is Ash's child! THOSE M_O_T_H_E_R_EFFERS! I'MMA EFFIN' KILL THEM! GOSH DARN IT. I hate Hayley and Bunny in your story. LOLOLOLOL. XDDD I'm practically typing furiously on my laptop but I don't caaare! I WILL get them (well, in my dreams)! But I swear to Goddess that I WILL get them! MWUAHAHAHA! I will crush their bones, rip out their organs, and destroy them! *gasps for air* Damn. I need to get all those stress out. LOLOLOL. But seriously, poor Mary-Lynette...): And poor Ash... Oh and for the two bitches over there (YEAH, YOU AND YOU *points at Bunny and Hayley*), blackmailing isn't the "thing" these days. It's stalking! Yeah, that's right. I will STALK you. o-o I will HUNT you down with my imaginary mechanical guy and destroy you!

Before I end this review, please always remember that I LOVE your stories and most of your characters (YEAH, THAT'S RIGHT! YOU TWO BITCHES AIN'T INCLUDED *flips Hayley and Bunny off*) and I can't wait for your next update :D

kinanbon x3 chapter 11 . 11/1/2010
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WHAT THE MONKEYS? i can't wait to read the sequel! lolz the song is really good the suspence is killing me . so many questions, but i must read! this the last chappy of this story -sniffle- all those good times and reviews :D love this and can't wait to read on :3

Sweet Night chapter 11 . 10/25/2010

nooooooooooo... come on! Bunny was Mare's friend in the book! you cannot do her a proper bitch now!

come on!

and they cannot be THAT evil!

poor Ash! my gosh! wait... tell me! was he the real father? or it was Jeremy? ...pleasseee ***puppy eyes*****

Oh God... this is going to be soo dramatic!

update soon!
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