|Reviews for Seal of Healing|
| Eiloween chapter 1 . 7/14/2010
Not a bad beginning.
| kawaiiemichan chapter 2 . 7/14/2010
please update soon! it was getting good!
and yay! to kushina and minato together in raising naruto! XD
| bookimp chapter 2 . 7/13/2010
I'm enjoying reading this fic, I haven't found many where his parents didn't die although I'm new to reading Naruto so far.
| UneXpectedflaShbacK chapter 2 . 7/13/2010
Like it! GReat job for writing this story! and your AWESOEME too.! :D :) XD
| Fae Pyre chapter 2 . 7/12/2010
I think you posted the wrong chapter. I still like this story though.
| geetac chapter 2 . 7/12/2010
I enjoyed reading the chapters and would like more of the story.
| Chew-a-Pick chapter 2 . 7/11/2010
Got a few corrections:
"the forth Hokage" should be...well, you know.
already be a ninja if he could have talked us into
letting him graduate early."
I think this should be "He would have already been...if he had talked us..."?
"Bushin" and "Sanin" should be "Bunshin" and "Sannin" respectively.
Great chapter, overall. I like your description on the anxiety of shinobi's parents and your desicion on taking the plot slowly and to focus on character development, since I think most fighting scenes have little to nothing to do with the plot anyways.
| Piper Julian chapter 2 . 7/11/2010
Amazing spelling/grammar. You are an excellent writer in that sense! Character build up is also superb:). The only thing that I think you are struggling with is how you are building up the plot- it is unclear still what direction you are taking your story in xD.
| InuNarufan01 chapter 2 . 7/11/2010
Wow this chapter is really good in my opinion. Also the whole thing with Team Guy cooking, especially w/ Rock Lee wearing a pink apron. 'shivers' Overall,looking foreward to the next chapter.
| InuNarufan01 chapter 1 . 7/11/2010
That was a very good chapter, can't wait for the next one. I like how this chapter is starting off a little different than other Naruto beign raised by his parents stories.
| maria chapter 1 . 7/9/2010
deanine this chapter was good so far. I can't wait till the next chapter, I'm very interested in the fact that you'll have no Akatsuki or Madara in your fanfic. I love to read fanfics that deviate some what from the original. As for Minato and Kushina are fine the way you made them, i totally see them being that way with Naruto. After all they are in a ninja village and seriously i don't think they can keep Naruto out away from trouble at all, it's NARUTO we're talking about here lol. Anyway, can't wait till for the next chapter.
| hitsugayatoshirou1220 chapter 1 . 7/9/2010
nice chap! reckless! just lile the naruto everyone knows!
| Chew-a-Pick chapter 1 . 7/8/2010
Your idea of the "healers" seems to be interesting and has a lot of potentials. :)
As so far in the manga Kishi has never depicted shinobi with their toddlers (right? Well, so far as I remember) I think this interpretation is fairly okay and logical, though having Naruto as a regular visitor with major injuries might be a little overboard, but that must be because he imitates people around him like most kids do, so yeah. It might be more believable if he only suffered minor injuries, IMHO.
| InARealPickle chapter 1 . 7/8/2010
They have a five year old who's constantly hospitalized... of course they're negligent parents!
Who leaves a five year old unsupervised? !