Reviews for Breathless Treasure
bella456 chapter 12 . 7/26
Ii think she should get pregnant as Edward missed out on Renesmee birth
Guest chapter 4 . 9/28/2014
Terrible writing
bigvamsis chapter 28 . 7/26/2014
is that the end or not? update soon
ladeerelli chapter 2 . 4/1/2014
Edward needing a haircut and shave... Kinda turned me off... Isn't he a vampire? Sorry...
Twilightfreakje chapter 28 . 12/9/2013
I liked your story.
Found the change in imprints a little strange. But it works well in your stort.

I have one idea, get a beta (someone who will pre read your story) there are so many mistakes in your story.
English isn't my first language and it bothered even me.

Keep on writing.
bmthespian chapter 28 . 12/2/2013
Nice ending.
queen cullen0527 chapter 28 . 11/30/2013
YESSSSSSSSSSSSSSSS now what are you doing with rennesme and jake and landon ... Interesting.
nessa01 chapter 28 . 11/30/2013
Omg i cant believe that was the last chapter. Thank u for writing an amazing storie!
Matthias Stormcrow chapter 27 . 10/11/2013
Super chapter I love it.
Matthias Stormcrow chapter 26 . 10/11/2013
Cool
Matthias Stormcrow chapter 25 . 10/11/2013
Well done I love it.
Matthias Stormcrow chapter 24 . 10/11/2013
Well done.
Matthias Stormcrow chapter 23 . 10/11/2013
Amazing chapter.
Matthias Stormcrow chapter 22 . 10/11/2013
Well done what's next?
Matthias Stormcrow chapter 21 . 10/11/2013
Amazing.
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