|Reviews for Breathless Treasure|
| Luisa Tipelu chapter 17 . 7/22/2016
I enjoyed it until it started going 18 I had to skip a few chapters...
| sue1zide chapter 4 . 6/4/2016
I'm surprised that Edward didn't know what Tanya did, from her thoughts.
| bella456 chapter 12 . 7/26/2015
Ii think she should get pregnant as Edward missed out on Renesmee birth
| Guest chapter 4 . 9/28/2014
| bigvamsis chapter 28 . 7/26/2014
is that the end or not? update soon
| ladeerelli chapter 2 . 4/1/2014
Edward needing a haircut and shave... Kinda turned me off... Isn't he a vampire? Sorry...
| Twilightfreakje chapter 28 . 12/9/2013
I liked your story.
Found the change in imprints a little strange. But it works well in your stort.
I have one idea, get a beta (someone who will pre read your story) there are so many mistakes in your story.
English isn't my first language and it bothered even me.
Keep on writing.
| bmthespian chapter 28 . 12/2/2013
| queen cullen0527 chapter 28 . 11/30/2013
YESSSSSSSSSSSSSSSS now what are you doing with rennesme and jake and landon ... Interesting.
| nessa01 chapter 28 . 11/30/2013
Omg i cant believe that was the last chapter. Thank u for writing an amazing storie!
| Matthias Stormcrow chapter 27 . 10/11/2013
Super chapter I love it.
| Matthias Stormcrow chapter 26 . 10/11/2013
| Matthias Stormcrow chapter 25 . 10/11/2013
Well done I love it.
| Matthias Stormcrow chapter 24 . 10/11/2013
| Matthias Stormcrow chapter 23 . 10/11/2013