Reviews for Tied Up
Guest chapter 1 . 7/2
Not bad for your first time writing an M rated fic.
My-name-is-a-drug-legit chapter 1 . 6/18
That was actually pretty good. The sex talk was believable; sexy and hot, but not overly pornographic (fake). Though I'm a little worried about the lack of lubricant. Men don't create there own lubricant when they are aroused, other then precum, so Merlin could have been seriously hurt. Other then that, the scene was very provocative and sexy. Possessive!Arther is always enjoyable, though it would have been more believable if it was someone like Gwaine that Merlin was smiling at. I enjoyed the fact that Arthur made Merlin wait, too, because that sounds positively evil, and very Arthur-like (we all know he has a cruel imagination when it comes to Merlin). I also like that fact that you made it known that Arthur had trouble leaving Merlin all tied up and needy (and wasn't that just the best image ever, especially the fact that he was wearing nothing but his neckerchief!), because it added a more caring side to it. The thing I despise in most sex stories is when they make it overly pornographic, and show no real emotions other then uncaring lust.

P.S. There was no spelling mistakes or grammar mistakes, which is points to you since I am a bit of a grammar Nazi.

P.P.S. Why could Merlin not undo the knots with his magic? Was it because he didn't want to alert Arthur to his magic or...?
SpartasBrony chapter 1 . 12/27/2014
What. The. Fuck?
Player8888 chapter 1 . 12/15/2014
Sexy:)good job
Holly-Mae chapter 1 . 11/29/2014
Omg I'm just here fangirlling. Great job and keep it up. That smut was something else I'm telling you. Have a great day, Holly-Mae.
Glynna chapter 1 . 11/20/2014
This is so amazingly stunning and so hot *fans self*, well done! :D
Morgana Chwaaaan chapter 1 . 9/15/2014
AH! So kawaii!
godess bubbles chapter 1 . 8/27/2014
I love those two! Does Arthur know of Merlin's magic?
Guest chapter 1 . 7/3/2014
i am wet
Guest chapter 1 . 6/9/2014
F jgfmhf,jrmursrsnyrsmutemr,! LET ME LOVE YOU! ( and get clean panties. .)
The Reviewer 13 chapter 1 . 2/25/2014
I loved every bit of it :) though I didn't know it was rated M because I just read the description and thought "oh, he's going to lock him in his bedroom and be like 'you can't come out until you admit you're mine!'" It was a happy mistake. And I really feel like that is how Arthur would act in this situation. The characters felt real.
mysy chapter 1 . 2/20/2014
actualy you did really god
exceptionally god, especially since this is your'r first M...
sorry for the mistakes, English is not my mother language
m chapter 1 . 1/15/2014
asdfghjkl! Love it!
Mycroft Holmes chapter 1 . 1/8/2014
G
aphaiaeternity chapter 1 . 12/2/2013
lol dw it was great! I loved it...I recently started shipping this and now I do soooo much more. :)
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