Reviews for Take Me Under
Neshomeleh chapter 1 . 11/15/2012
In a way, Dean fucked up, but on the other hand he was drunk and all he did was laugh... Grown men in a bar should go over such things without violence... and still it should have been one vs one, well, your story was good:)
Ava chapter 1 . 1/28/2012
Oh, if only Dean and Sammy would help one another in such ways in the series. I love your writing. The brotherliness makes me happy and sad at the same time-is it really so hard? Why do they always have to argue in the series? Arg! Awesome back story though, love it.
mainegirlwrites chapter 1 . 1/12/2012
So wonderfully written, thank you for the pleasure of reading this, and thanks to Bev for encouraging you on!
kissacazador chapter 1 . 7/25/2011
This was a very heartbreaking story and I am so sad. Poor Dean...self-loathing and got the crap beaten out of him.

So glad that Sam was there in the end to pick up the pieces.

Great job!
badaiwind chapter 1 . 3/7/2011
Self medication to depression & self loathing by Dr. Dean
Konoha's White Fang chapter 1 . 1/13/2011
This was really good. I loved how you portrayed Dean's character and the mix of feelings he was experiencing. It very well-written.

Good work.

Have a nice day!

smalld1171 chapter 1 . 12/12/2010
Hi there! I just read this story and I absolutely loved it! I am a Dean fan myself and this is the exact kind of story that I love to read! Great job!
CeCe Away chapter 1 . 7/20/2010
Very sweet. I enjoyed this very much.
Rosetta Brunestud chapter 1 . 7/19/2010
Amazing one ~

I really loved that D

See you next one o/

nwspaprtaxis chapter 1 . 7/18/2010

Although this just hurts - I can totally see Dean acting this way after a loss of a life. Especially if it's a child. The guy's an empath and he's such a perfect father. *sniffles* I just wanna hug him for it. I can see Dean picking a fight, coming out second-best, and Sam just going after him. And Dean slipping back under because he knows Sammy's got it and he's safe is sheer gold.


Now I need the second chapter with the petting and emo-talking and taping Dean together again.
GaelicAngel chapter 1 . 7/13/2010
Okay, I know Dean was hurting but what the HELL was the idiot thinking.

Thank God for Sammy, or else...

Loved it and I really enjoyed reading this.
MeAzrael chapter 1 . 7/12/2010
Yay, honey: you're really an artist in hurting poor old Dean good and thorough :-) And I loved the idea to write a short story about a life they couldn't safe. I'm sure there were quite a few of these ones, and they don't talk much about it, but we know, how they suffer, especially Dean with his much too big conscience and his inherent feelings of guilt.

In my book this was a brilliant description of crawling into the pit deliberately, and welcoming it. He really should look for a nice shrink some time (not the one you have in mind for him right now, as I happen to know ;-) Loved Sammy running to rescue, and how he gets all rage and revenge, and man, I'm glad not to stick in the shoes of these bikers, when all hell brakes loose :-)

Crossed fingers for many reviews, you earn them, sweetums!


DeansBabyBird chapter 1 . 7/12/2010
Hey Barbara

That's lovely. You got the suffering hero just right. Dean grieves for anyone he doesn't manage to save but especially a child. I knew exactly where you were going sending Dean to the bar and part of me wanted you to rescue him before he got the crap beaten out of him but that would not have been the Dean we know and love.

That arm breaking was a big old ouch! I broke my wrist a few years ago and remember the crack very well as the bone shattered.

Sam was wonderfully caring and I loved Dean's acceptance that he was 'home' when you got him to the Impala.

Thank you so much. I knew there was a longer story here and you did a lovely job on writing it.

bev xxxxxxxxx
zuimar chapter 1 . 7/10/2010
Man, what a sad story, that was really heartbreaking!

Loved the reference that Sam made about the Impala being family, good catch!

I wouldn't say no to another chapter, I love me some emo-talk between the boys.
T.L. Arens chapter 1 . 7/9/2010
I love 'Sam-to-the-rescue' stories! This was a little short, but I love how Sam can get so mad "A brooding, angry Sam was never a good thing."

yeah, no doubt those bikers won't look too pretty once they meet up with Dean's little brother *insert evil cackle here*

And I really felt for Dean. He's been so ingrained into thinking that 'every life, at every cost is worth the price for admission'-I mean, there's hero, and then there's the memory of one ("There's a thin line between being a hero and being a memory."-Optimus Prime) And certainly Sam and Dean walk that line.

Thank you for the story. -