aww please update soon

Hey there! I am so loving this story! The characterization is fantastic, the plot is engaging and I think you did an amazing job.

One thing that is a bit confusing is the tenses of the verbs, i find that you have some problems with these (maybe because English is not you first language, and wow you are so brave writing something so long if that's so! neither am i BTW). I just think that a beta reader could help you with these grammatical mistakes and make the fic just perfect.
Hope I didn't offend you in any way :)

er... sawada? i jut read sawada?

updates? you there? HELLO!?

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This is a wonderful story! I absolutely love this story so far but there's one thing that is bothering me. Lucius was born in 1953-1954 and Sirius was born in 1959. Therefore Hadrian can't be born in 1950. I hope you somehow fix that. Otherwise, I think this story is really really good. I really really really do hope that you'll continue it!

Just letting you know that you still have readers that love this story :-)! Please update soo ! I can just imagine Tom/Voldemort being possessive with Harry even more (if possible) once cannon and this one merge hehe

Please update, the story is amazing! One of the best fanfic I'v ever read.

This is one of the good story i found..But so Sad more than 5 yrs no update.. well i hope your doing well and one of this days u find a inspiration to continue this a nice day-:))

Please pretty please update .This story is really so brilliant (i reread it almost every week ) that its painful to wait for updates.
Sorry about the whining but i love this story .
Happy writing!

I saw that subtle Katekyo hitman reborn reference! ˏ₍•ɞ•₎ˎ "Sawada"

What an interesting plot line you have created! I must say that I am intrigued by it and saddened by the fact that you haven't updated in the last 5 years. It is too good of a story to stop. I hope that everything is alright for you and that you may find the inspiration to continue soon.

Thanks for sharing! It really is a great story and one that should be seen to the end!

Hi i love this story its simply amazing. And hermione as sirius black i couldnt stop laughing i hope you will update soon

Please continue this is great.

this is really cool, hope you update it