Reviews for Gun Holder
Light Fox chapter 1 . 4/2
I'll just get this out usually the male and female protagonists are sister and brother so Chessshipping, HeartSoulShipping, and any other female protagonist x male protagonist means- Sis x Bro. Which is totolly gross.

I mean if you have a brother or sister you'll be making out with him/her kissing him, her and well yeah;-(

The only one female protagonist x male protagonist passing my radar is... NONE
Guest chapter 1 . 7/1/2014
8 Oh wow. I did not see that coming. Cool...
phionexxx chapter 1 . 3/6/2013

Laxies chapter 1 . 7/4/2011
I don't know what you are think this is absolutly awesome, perfect, fantastic, great, and so much more. I actual approve of the couple LyraxSilver though so it makes a difference.
terra-cotta-warrior chapter 1 . 3/20/2011
So sad! Could you make a sequel with a happy ending? (I'm a sucker for happy, sappy endings)
Capital WHY chapter 1 . 2/6/2011

Really good, but no comment other than that.


Ethan . . . ;_;



P.S. Oh fine, here's a comment. That was sooooo good! But so sad . . . ;( Wow.

OKay. Done now.
Random Reader chapter 1 . 1/24/2011
Now I feel terribly angustiated.

The last piece was breathtaking. I liked it a lot!
fately chapter 1 . 9/30/2010
Serefessa chapter 1 . 8/19/2010
Heart and Soul was never meant to happen.

And that's why the game's called Soulsilver. ;3
Ravens Bane chapter 1 . 7/30/2010
I swear, the amount of times I read 'Oh my Arceus' is enough to make me want to hurt a small child.
kaori kuni chapter 1 . 7/11/2010
Confusing in some parts. I felt like there were some parts missing.. I don't know. And this Lyra is stupid. No matter what explanations and excuses the guy has, a girl must not stay with him. It'll only end in tragedy. Stupid, stupid Lyra.

And to think she even chose Silver over Ethan! Heart-breaking. Lyra you're a silly girl.

I think I'd erase the last line. It's like... mood killer and the one before it is nice as an ending.

Thanks for this :) I enjoyed it. I love angst.
fooboo24 chapter 1 . 7/10/2010
Oh, this was just so sad!

I wanted to cry!

But you're very good at portraying emotions, I should say that in the least! What with how Ethan seemed so pained and hurt - this entire one-shot was just great in whole, not to mention an instant favorite to me, as well!
The Genius Mage chapter 1 . 7/9/2010
Huh? What? I'm both confused and's like my subconscious gets it, but my mind doesn't.

Oh well. Intense! Well written! Not surprising, of course.

...I ship both SoulSilver and HeartSoul. Variety FTW! XD
little-spark chapter 1 . 7/9/2010
Daamn, this was really intense! Well written and very emotional! 3
Rika Tone chapter 1 . 7/9/2010
Real good story :) It really explains how life is: unfair, hard, and just plain sad. But still has those happy moments.

Soulsilvershipper here, but I have no reason to to be mad at you for liking heartsoulshipping.