Reviews for Rusty Park Swings
JunPearlStar chapter 1 . 8/30/2011
Only One Word...

xotennisloverxo chapter 1 . 7/6/2011
Talk about cute! This story IS good enough to write another and I really hope that you do so. It’s so hard to find a good twinleafshipping story, as there isn’t enough on here, but you managed to do it! Besides having the characterization and interaction between the two being flawless, the way you wrote it maximized the ingenuity to the story. You detonated the various traits of Barry so fluidly that I felt like I personally knew him when I was reading. With Dawn’s emotions being the backlash of his traits, this story was very pleasant. I hope that you write more twinleafshipping!
I chapter 1 . 2/4/2011
Tooo shortt! but I like it!
TheNooby chapter 1 . 8/24/2010
D'aaww... Slightly, this is kind of cute... Bleh... 8/10 for being too damn short.
Anon chapter 1 . 7/28/2010
Very cute. I think it captures the essence of twinleafshipping perfectly. Nice job!
SephiruRibbon chapter 1 . 7/10/2010
Sweet. It captures the characters and it's a cute romance. :) I liked it.
mudkipluvr4ever chapter 1 . 7/10/2010
Hey i really liked it and nice detail! You got the characters right to! Good job! :)
Apples Who Dance With Oranges chapter 1 . 7/10/2010
That was a really good story