Reviews for My Sweet Thing
susanpr chapter 1 . 7/9/2010
Please continue this after the contest. Edward is so cute, and I would like to see what happens to him and Bella.
fanficreader83 chapter 1 . 7/9/2010
He is fun and this would definitely be great if we were able to get more!
AllyR chapter 1 . 7/9/2010
I really hope you decide to continue this after the contest! It looks really interesting and I love this version of Edward :)
hikarilunas chapter 1 . 7/9/2010
It is a nice story so far, not my favourite of yours but we'll see. Suscribed to story alert too.
harajuku7 chapter 1 . 7/9/2010
Giggity Giggity! I loved this! Bronze is so awesome and you should win best Edward. It was so cute. I can't wait for you to hopefully continue this! I hope Bella kicks Rose to the curb. Ugh! I also love you writing style; it was really different from the way others write. I am so excited!
cvds chapter 1 . 7/9/2010
Loved it! Good luck in the contest:)
71star chapter 1 . 7/9/2010
Oh... You have to continue...

I need to find out what happens!

It's going to be a great story!
foreverandnevr chapter 1 . 7/9/2010
I adore this!

So sweet. The language you use as well is very fresh and different from what we usually see in fics

guitarbabe2005 chapter 1 . 7/9/2010
so far so good
FutureMrsBCullen chapter 1 . 7/9/2010
u should soo continue this
rachelcullen77 chapter 1 . 7/9/2010
Hey baby!

As you know, I fucking adore this, and I LOVE Bronze. He is just adorable...I loved it, and I will be begging for a sequel! I love that line from Spongebob Square Pants. Its just too cute!

And silly Bella thinking that about Bronze. I'm so glad he isn't mad at her for saying that. I want some loving from these two!

I loved it!

And love you! xxx
Chilly Howdy chapter 1 . 7/9/2010
interesting start hun :0) and I would love to see more of it! Thanks for sharing this story :0)
JayNahNah chapter 1 . 7/9/2010
I loved it! So...I'm guessing Charlie is buying the trailer park from the Cullens so that is why the cab afford the private school...or it's scholarship.

Either was, I think you should continue this. I think it would make a sweet story!
emilydearie chapter 1 . 7/9/2010
very good! would LOVE to see it finished!
kalakaie chapter 1 . 7/9/2010
Ooooooo! Please please, pretty please continue with this! :)
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