Reviews for Broken Hearts Combined
Guest chapter 20 . 5/26/2014
hated the line, why did you change your format. it game me a headache
Guest chapter 10 . 5/21/2014
fyi: the state files the charges its not up to the victim to file charges the d.a's office decides whether or not to file charges
Guest chapter 9 . 5/21/2014
ya he needs counseling. hes a sociopath. he needs to be locked up for good.
Guest chapter 8 . 5/21/2014
what the eff, filler chapter
Guest chapter 7 . 5/21/2014
carlisle is an idiot. jacob needs to be locked up. what kind of a doctor is he. i cant believe they waited so long to help her lets wait till later so she can be beatin and rape some more
Guest chapter 4 . 5/21/2014
the fuck, bella get the fuck out of there. she needs to call the cops, it called rape even though your married. he can cause some damage when she's dry. fuck, why cant charlie come over she's got to have some bruises on her. even carlisle her doctor should know when she lifts up her shirt. he has a duty to report this. she needs help she's physically and verbally abused. why cant alice or jasper call the cops they know something is wrong. does she not have anyone who care about her. this is a depressing story.
mommymac0508 chapter 36 . 2/22/2014
Hello I just read it all in two days I loved it wow the drama the love the crazy family it was great thank you
Melinda the Proud Bookworm chapter 3 . 10/23/2013
Like the idea, but you need to break up the paragraphs in some places. They have dialogue from multiple characters. And in the first two chapters there should be some dialogue, not just all one recap.

Looking forward to more.
Sarah Amin chapter 4 . 1/8/2013
why the hell wont she let carlisle or alice help her .. he's terrible !
Guest chapter 1 . 12/19/2012
Edward is the stupidest man on the planet. After everything Tany adid to him he still comtinued to fuck her without a condom? Really?
Jenn Jean Cullen chapter 35 . 11/25/2012
Loved your story!
LulaGrace chapter 10 . 9/26/2012
I'm enjoying this so far and don't mind allowing for a few unrealistic things, but would the ladies really be pressing her just after she was rescued from a severe beating by a long term abusive husband? Not so much...

Looking forward to reading more and to (hopefully) being introduced to a very large and loving E & B family!
momma2fan chapter 35 . 9/20/2012
Thanks for writing. Great story!
mylifemyrules1 chapter 17 . 8/27/2012
TRob chapter 36 . 2/5/2012
such a beatiful story...congratulations...

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