Reviews for Sins and Vices
Guest chapter 1 . 10/13/2012
good
Cassiakohn chapter 1 . 12/1/2010
that was freakin awesome! I've been wanting to find another new one and wow i'm shocked at how much i like it. great work!
melissaa12 chapter 1 . 11/1/2010
Incredible smuttiness for a first timer! Loved it!
Lulabell75 chapter 1 . 9/12/2010
Wow! First of all, I've gotta ask the obvious...Are you gonna continue this at all? I think a little bit more would be really exciting. Second, it took a lot of guts to try and then pull off a story in the 2nd person. As you stated at the beginning it was difficult to write, but it is also just a difficult to read. Not everyone can read a story written in the 2nd person. So, while I think that your story may attract more readers by being in the 1st or 3rd person, I have to say bravo on writing an excellent story and if they aren't smart enough to read it...that's their problem.
mineralgirlzmama chapter 1 . 9/8/2010
wow! lol i'm speechless!
farmgirl4life chapter 1 . 8/13/2010
r u going to make more chapters cause this is good
Mrs.Jensen chapter 1 . 8/6/2010
THAT was hot!
Twihard-girl chapter 1 . 7/14/2010
Great story, but I really really think you need to continue this story! Please!
Isa-marry chapter 1 . 7/13/2010
Mmmm... She's a very, very lucky girl. I'm sure she'll have a lot of repeat. I'm so jalous lol.

It was a little different at 2nd person, but not bad at all.

I really liked this OS and I found your writing very good.

Good job.
GoddessOfLove321 chapter 1 . 7/10/2010
um yea amazing can i get a part 2 or something lol
fuzzy0682 chapter 1 . 7/10/2010
great writing
cvds chapter 1 . 7/10/2010
Loved it! Sexy and hot;)
hotmama4jd chapter 1 . 7/10/2010
nice for your first lemon! :)
parkesy23 chapter 1 . 7/10/2010
for your first oneshot - it was awesome

loved it

thanks heaps
boneslegendaryhands chapter 1 . 7/9/2010
Holy hawt!

Well done my friend, well done!

*runs off for a cold shower*
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