Reviews for There Once Was a King
BookwormBaby2580 chapter 18 . 12/4/2011
I don't just read your chapters, I crawl right inside them, wrap them all up around me, and live them. Damn. I can't even say how much I love this story.
kinsano chapter 11 . 12/4/2011
I know I'm behind here, but my vote is for Carlisle to end it with Jane ASAP! The girls won't care when Jane leaves-probably won't even notice she's gone...
cbrendible chapter 18 . 12/4/2011
Holy!... Wow!... Just... Wow! I can't air for the next chapter!
wickedXTC chapter 18 . 12/4/2011
So when I saw this update in my inbox, I started bouncing in my chair and mumbling "yes, yes, yes, yes, yes, yes..."

I'm pretty sure my husband thought I was watching porn.

You're awesome, this chapter was awesome, this story is completely awesome. Keep it up lady. (:
Suzbythesea chapter 18 . 12/4/2011
Just looove the chemistry you write between Carlisle and Bella. And the love letter from Carlisle... *swoooon*. Have so missed this story, thankyou so much for updating ! )
edwardbabymomma chapter 18 . 12/4/2011
Love this chapter
hnwhitlock2000 chapter 18 . 12/4/2011
He needs to get that divorce soon!
EmmaPen chapter 18 . 12/4/2011
Gah! This story is so beautifully written. My heart aches so much for them. I want them to be happy.
Gillian Aubrey chapter 18 . 12/4/2011
You have quite a way with words, LOVED it!
twificfan chapter 18 . 12/4/2011
I haven't heard from you girls as much as I'd love to. Your stories are the shining light of the Fan Fiction Kingdom! I couldn't believe my eyes when I saw that you updated, it's always such an amazing treat. I can't wait for B&C's getaway.
kinsano chapter 6 . 12/4/2011
Yeah, I can see why you picked Carlisle for this fic-Edward would be slitting his wrists in guilt at this point...
plummy chapter 18 . 12/4/2011
I love this story and am always so excited when you update.

The girls were perfect and questioning, and just right for their age. I especially loved when Alice put her temple against Bella's.

And I loved Carlisle's text message: "Just for a second, Bella..."

Thanks for writing this story!

sugunary chapter 18 . 12/4/2011
SO happy to see a TOWAK update! Never thought I would like a Carlisle Bella story. So much on the horizon huh? Hope they get their night away! Cant wait for the next update!
axylurvesu chapter 18 . 12/4/2011
I've run out of compliments to give you. *in awe* It's just so great.
Ziva84 chapter 18 . 12/4/2011
Great chapter. Bella is so great with the girls. I love Bella and Carlisle together.
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