Reviews for Perfecting the End
lonely chapter 1 . 10/27/2011
this really touched me. it feels real. and interesting! good work!
writergirl318 chapter 1 . 1/27/2011
wow this gave me shivers at the end! I loved it! It was well-written and it really seemed like the mindset of an annerexic person!
SocksForDobby chapter 1 . 1/16/2011
You did well. It was very sad.

Gryffindor has no E in it. But aside from that... Brilliant.
magic.is.out.there chapter 1 . 12/28/2010
omg this is seriously sad, did she kill herself? :0 jesus :0 i was hoping she'd get better :(
Elle chapter 1 . 9/2/2010
This was a really fantastic piece of writing. I wish it wasn't just a oneshot - I was so interested to read more!

I especially loved how you finished it off - it had a really powerful ending! :)
marshmallowchoclatebunny chapter 1 . 8/14/2010
I absolutely love it. It seems there are few stories about Dominique alone out there, and this, in my opinion, is one of the best. Great job :)
Copper Sunlight chapter 1 . 8/9/2010
That was really good. You really captured the emotions that someone with an ED has. I was a vicim of Bullimia Nervosa for four years and your story really reminds me of what I went through, a fate no one should have to endure. Keep up the good work.

Sunny
miss bubblegum chapter 1 . 7/16/2010
how sad! i liked it so much tho! it has made its place in my favs...
xXBeckyFoo chapter 1 . 7/13/2010
Omg.

It gave me the chills!

You described everything so well...wow.
thepotionsmaster369 chapter 1 . 7/10/2010
Wow , that was amazing and so real and believable. Well done :D oh and it was very sad...:(