|Reviews for The Heat|
| Jadzia Bear chapter 1 . 7/10/2010
Haha love it : )
I hate those people that don't seem to sweat, even when the weather is disgusting!
Some beautiful descriptions and turns of phrase in this one, but I should know not to expect anything different from you : )
| BlueEyedBrigadier chapter 1 . 7/10/2010
Huh...quite the tricky little tale you've crafted here, xfirefly9x. Deceptively simple - Mal thinking and making observations about the heat and Inara's apparent ability to ignore it - but it's deeper than that, isn't it? He's got crew out in foreign terrain and he can't simply just wait for the signal marking their retun...the vigilant sentinel looking after his peeps. That and an inadvertent clue into Inara and her signs of being just as human as the rest of them...;D