|Reviews for Doppelgänger: Sequel to Regression|
| Clarica chapter 32 . 6/12/2014
I have to tell you, this fic and the first Regression are the most intrigued stories I've ever read... you have such an imagination...and I have to read Regression one more time because the first one I've read it with to much rush...
I hope to learn more from your style...
these two fics are my favourite... and you are simply great in describing my forever Clois disgrace...
I'm eager to start the final part...
and even with our differences about Clois, their chemistry and when it started to emerge, you are one of my best authors about them.
:D :D :D
| Clarica chapter 31 . 6/11/2014
your sex scene... was so sensual, erotic... so perfect for them: one of the most beautiful love scenes I've ever read: GREAT!
Very good job...
but, I want to let you know that there's something bothering me about them and the sexual chemistry you portrayed in their adult relationship and in this chapter in particular and is this:
how could have they never felt lightly attracted to one another in their green years... (I mean the contrast between the show with all their allusions in season 4 first and then in episodes Aqua with A.C. and his reaction at her lap dance in Exposed and later Crismon and on until season 8 and your versions of the facts recounted by Lois...) and then once adults they find each other so sexually exciting...
don't get me wrong, it's not a criticism...it's simply something that doesn't fit with my version of them in my head and the true love they have for each other in your story...it's the only part of your vision of them that I don't share with you I guess...
Anyway Linda, I really deeply love this story...this is my amazing one.
I mean it
| Clarica chapter 17 . 6/5/2014
Any time I think I've read your best piece of writing...I find out another one so incredibly better...
Wow... this chapter... your description of their first kiss...wow...a masterpiece... Linda I've never ever read anything like that both in English or in my own Italian language... ever...beautiful...
For me there, you got captured the perfect beauty of their chemistry...
What I saw there was my perfect Clois disgrace...
I wish I can write as half well as you...I have to study your style...
as Lois once said to Clark: 'THANK YOU...'
| Clarica chapter 10 . 5/30/2014
Linda I loooooveeeeeee youuuuuuu! I really love you for this chapter... you've talked out the clana drama in such a great way... the words you put in Lois character are so in 'character' for her...
you are a great writer, wounderful observer of the human nature and you really get what a real relationship involving a couple means in the real world...
and this is what I saw in Clois and in their adult relationship.
Regarding your style I'm learning so much new beloved English verbs...
But the most important thing is the story... THIS IS MY FAVORITE FIC OF YOURS right now...
So THANK YOUUUUUUUUUU
:D :D :D
| Clarica chapter 4 . 5/18/2014
Hey Linda, you are a master, your Lois mail is a masterpiece... the first part about Skipper/Lana 'opera' very in character for them...funny...so funny, I laughed all the time... your story is so beautiful... I'm a slow reader beacuse of my little kids and the no time on my own but I keep going on with everything you write about clois...thanks and very, very good job!
| Beforethedawnbreaks chapter 32 . 8/14/2013
Poor clark! I wouldn't blame for getting rid of those memories. I hope Something terrible happens to Lana. She's done nothing but ruin his life. She a witch in every sense of the word.
| fishman chapter 24 . 1/2/2012
Oh, god damn someone kill Oliver already. Maybe Lana could do some magic on him.
| treehillgirl1323 chapter 32 . 7/10/2011
I'm glad to see that you finally finished this story! Yay! Now you can work on the sequel and i am dying to know what happens next on Justice! I will wait patiently for that just as i will wait patiently for your other story that i hope you haven't forgotten "What Will Be", yeah, looking forward for that one as well.
| BloodRose101 chapter 32 . 7/9/2011
Awesome job! I'm so happy you shared such brilliant fanfics with us. I was wondering will there another installment? Great job once again I loved how you wrote Clark and Lois's relationship.
| Hillover chapter 32 . 7/9/2011
two intimate scenes in a row...you're so kind to us...so thank you...after all of the chaos in this part we really need that to have something to hold on to the Clois happy ending.
Now everything was back to normal but I'm so confuse , why Smallville still remembered his life in the other lifetime and Lois didn't have any clue about it and she and other people somehow still live their lives after Lana's trip backed to the past, just like there were two timelines at the same time. I'm lost again..lol..
the drama queen still lives in her denial and I'm so happy more to read..:)...As much as I hate Lana, I still love her because without her we wouldn't have these great dramas.
Hope I'll find the answers in the sequel sooonnnn!...
Thanks so much for sharing your great stories with us...
| gu61 chapter 32 . 7/8/2011
Are going to introduce the suprise if I remember correctly? A suprise that really pissed me off and you never really finished the story on another site. Please don't do that suprise, just end the story here, and not frustrate the hell out me.
| mangers chapter 32 . 7/8/2011
Wow, I can't believe that it's finished! Such an amazing story that I thoroughly enjoyed reading every chapter of :) I was so glad that everything went back to the way it was supposed to be, I think it would have broke my heart if it didn't! I loved the ending, I noticed maybe there were a few prompts for another sequel? ;D
Overall, a top quality story. Thank you :)
| Hillover chapter 30 . 7/3/2011
First poor Smallville and Clark.
Secondly, damn Lana, I think she won't give in that easily, and I have some theories for this:
1. She'll try to go back to the past maybe when Lois/Joanne was in the hospital and get rid of her. If Lois is out of the picture from the very start then Clark won't have the memories of the life he once had with her. And she and Clark will live happily ever after.
2. She'll reverse the spell to the day before young Lois/Jo came to the future so that she's still in Clark life and waiting for him to change his mind to be with her.
But if she didn't reverse the spell like everybody hopes that she will then why J'onn doesn't know so they can prevent her, and they had the book and Lana didn't then how can she casts the spell? I'm lost again and leave this to you then...:)...I just want to tell you that I really admire your imagination and your writing skill as well.
Last, please up date soon...:)...
| C. S. Tolkien chapter 30 . 7/2/2011
Good story, but you need to put that is a sequel in the title, you could have put it in the summary.
| Hillover chapter 28 . 6/25/2011
Linda, you don't know how happy Im seeing your knew updates.
I think Lana just loved herself, she didn't care about others' feelings as long as she had what she wanted. Though Clark's words' were hurtful to her (definitely not to me..lol..) but they were all had to be said out loud so she could get out of her daydreams about him being in love with her. Despite all the hating I might have, I still feel sorry for her, she didn't know that she's wrong.
Martha emphasized time and time again that the book needed to be destroyed before the spell was reversed, so I guess that your third book must be about it, maybe Lana brings them back to the day before Jo was brought to the future so everyone won't remember about the book, well maybe I'm wrong but I don't care as long as your still continue on writing this story. Please do!...
Besides my two favorite authors Marc Levy and Dan Brown, you're the third author that I couldn't and didn't want to put the stories down, I've already read this series 3 times while waiting for your new update, and honestly I still want to re-read them all over again.
Thanks for sharing this great story and UDS.
BTW I love the 'sharing Lois' idea.