|Reviews for Fox and Cards|
| Thunder Dragon chapter 9 . 8/18
Oh and when Mewtwo goes into his Shadow Mewtwo form he can Mega Evolve into Mega Shadow Mewtwo and when he is training under Jubei and mastering his new abilities before ChronoPhantasma Mewtwo must eventually bypass the Shadow Mewtwo form entirely and go straight into his Mega Shadow Mewtwo form when he needs to and once again to keep his enemy guessing.
| Thunder Dragon chapter 9 . 8/18
Can I pose a challenge for a story? If you cannot do this challenge yourself that is fine but can you at least post it as a challenge exactly as it is down below. I would do it myself but for some reason I cannot officially log in to the site and post it myself so I would be extremely grateful if you did this for me as this is a story I would love to see be put to life and has a premise that I think is extremely thought out and unique.
Now here is the main premise for the Story. it is a Pokémon BlazeBlue crossover with Mewtwo as the main character. See further details down below.
Story Challenge Part 1: Mewtwo's origin and powers. Mewtwo has to be the one from the Pokémon The First Movie Mew VS. Mewtwo also known as Mewtwo Strikes Back(including the special Mewtwo's Origin which is Mewtwo's backstory before the movie) Mewtwo has to have all the powers he has across the Pokémon Franchise but has to train and work hard to master them(see Mewtwo's training in Mewtwo Strikes Back for inspiration and see Death Battle's Mewtwo VS. Shadow the Hedgehog for Mewtwo's standard arsenal and abilities an tactics). Also due to exposure to the Boundary and Kokonoe's experiments in pulling out Mewtwo's weaknesses to bug, ghost and dark type damage he can also take on both his Mega Mewtwo X and his Mega Mewtwo Y forms and shift between the two keep his opponents guessing, But when Mewtwo loses his cool he becomes Shadow Mewtwo from Pokken Tournament but will eventually control it when he is given an Idea Engine in away similar to Ragna in his fight with Terumi at the end of Continuum Shift Extend which also holds inside of it a Synergy Stone and A Shadow Synergy Stone created by Kokonoe and training under Jubei after the events of Continuum Shift as well as be able to go into a drive, a burst mode, Synergy Burst, an overdrive, and an unlimited form.
Story Challenge Part 2: Mewtwo's arrival to the BlazeBlue World and his allegiance. When Amber and the other clones that Mewtwo was connected to passed away Doctor Fuji used a safety device(a teleportation device installed into the capsule) to teleport the infant Mewtwo to the BlazeBlue World due to Doctor Fuji knowing how powerful Mewtwo would become. Mewtwo has to be saved from his would be death in the Boundary by either the Amatarasu Unit's Intervention by transporting the infant Pokémon to Kokonoe's lab or Kokonoe's experiments in the Boundary where he grows up and matures naturally while mastering his abilities. Mewtwo has to become loyal to Kokonoe and Iron Tager in Sector Seven and see them as parental figures but not be loyal to Sector Seven itself and Mewtwo must also become a close friend to Lambda when the story carries over to BlazeBlue Continuum Shift Extend.
Story Challenge Part 3: Mewtwo's Adventure's, and his personality and development. Mewtwo has to go through the events of BlazeBlue Calamity Trigger, BlazeBlue Continuum Shift Extend, BlazeBlue ChronoPhantasma. as Mewtwo get's involved in the unfolding events of each the games while running missions for Sector Seven and Kokonoe until ChronoPhantasma. Mewtwo also has to develop into the character we see at the end of Pokémon Mewtwo Strikes Back and Mewtwo Returns during his adventures. A wise, philosophical, and noble hero who is not afraid to take action and can who can hold his own with the best of them.
| Thunder Dragon chapter 9 . 7/23
I have a request to make for this story, specifically for Naruto's return home.
Now Yuuko Ichihara has shown up all across the universe of Clamp as she is the Witch of Space and Time, and at the end of the Card Captor Sakura manga Yuuko has Sakura's key as(from what my sources say)Sakura no longer needs the key to cast spells. But Yuuko always charges a somewhat reasonable price for her services. So here is my idea. When Sakura gets all the Clow Cards from the anime let Naruto offer up his services to Yuuko or his knowledge of Chakra as his payment so he can go home.
| Birdly The Reaper Of Souls chapter 9 . 7/5
I hate to say but I like the original better Kyuubix naruto does not fit for this story and I don't see it being complete the more complex it is more harder it is to finish
Sorry but I had to voice my opinion
| thor94 chapter 9 . 6/26
otherwise little confused about cards.
all captured are sakura ones, or like with shaolan in the manga, few of the cards kicked by naruto are naruto propertie until the trial?
| Kaz chapter 9 . 6/11
I wonder... will Syaoran and Tomoyo fall in love with one another in the future?
| Guest chapter 9 . 6/11
| Mokkel chapter 9 . 5/20
i knew that the rewrite of this story was gonna be good but i didn't expect it to be this good!
| hana ariff chapter 9 . 4/19
Love this it up
| Locothehood chapter 9 . 4/14
Sweet cant wait to see more
| New Universe Returns chapter 9 . 4/14
Not so bad. Keep it up.
| Lord Mortensen chapter 9 . 4/14
Dude!I'm so happy that you updated this fic! This is one of my favorite stories! although took you so long to upgrade, the wait was worth it!
rather you not take long to upload a new chapter, but that I leave to your judgment!; I like your style of writing and I love this story.
I can only cheer you up to continue writing, and wait patiently for the next chapter.
greetings from Mexico and see you soon!
P.S: I can give you a suggestion ?, I think Tomoyo, could also learn to use the chakra; since she likes to draw (and if I remember she draw very good) I think it would be good idea that he could learn the technique of Sai making ink drawings (she could fly into a giant hawk ink, while recording a sakura in an aerial fight! )
| KeyofSolomon.M.E chapter 9 . 4/14
Really love the chapter and I'm so happy this updated. As always you pace your chapters wonderfully so i dont feel rush but im not bogged down by a-lot of un needed information. Why i see the anti demon things working on Kyu-chan I don't see them working on naruto the worse i think they could do is prevent him from using Kyu's chakra but thats not a giant deal when hes a powerhouse all his own. Tho if Li hurts Kyu i think naruto is very likely to put Li in his place quicker then Kyu puts back Korean BBQ. I love that this is a NarutoxSakura story but if you add anyone else or even hint at it i hope its Kyu i see her building up some sorta relation with Naruto for being the only one to follow her fathers teaching's and always looking out for her well being even tho her very existence has cause him pain for most of his life. Plus seeing Sakura a Kyubbi have a little rivaliar would be funny
| jbadillodavila chapter 9 . 4/14
Kyu-chan cosplay ja . muy bueno n.n
| Raidentensho chapter 9 . 4/14
nice. no doubt the Fight card would be next. now that one would be something. though will naruto obtain his own staff(from the necklace) or a set of rings for the cards he obtains be able to be used? looking forward to more. until then, ja ne!