Reviews for Fox and Cards
nya mayaha nya chapter 7 . 6/5/2014
This is really good please continue soon.
Macilnar chapter 7 . 1/30/2014
I really hope this isn't dead as it is a good story.
ivan0061509 chapter 7 . 12/10/2013
Hey I liked this chapter can't wait to read the next pne and also I still think u should go back to the orignal
Guest chapter 7 . 12/9/2013
Hey dude I enjoyed reading this chapter you should make more where the nine tails chakra comes so can't wait to read your next chapter
long live Uzumaki clan chapter 7 . 10/7/2013
This is good update soon
Syafiq chapter 7 . 9/20/2013
Pls update soon
Guest chapter 7 . 5/19/2013
Only read chapter one and two. So I dont know where you are with this story. However I must critic on this story NOW.

Before I begin I well not deny being biased in my opinion of clamp related works.

First it has CLEARLY been shown that in Tsubasa unless the world is ACTIVELY interfering like the barrier in the magical future world stoppin them from leaving it doesn't effect there original abilities further proof being that kurogane could use his technique even in oto. Which is my you making naruto possess me off.

Yes im using tsubasa as a cross referance because it not only has character the series but the abilities powers and it even showed sakura giving clone sakura the staff.

Third naruto is TWELVE (THIRTEEN?) and sakura is what 9 at most. I CANNOT see any romantic relationship like with sayaoran(dont forget america original dubbing fucked up the the names) unless it happens WAY AFTER CANON like when she's twelve or thirteen.

And last but NOT least this world I mean sakuras EVERY THING revolves around magical and supernatural abilities so PLEASE DO NOT FUCKING SCREW WITH OR TWIST THE "KNOWN" WORLDS IN CLAMP.

If you read my critics then I thank you for your time. Now on to questions.

Will you limit this to cardcaptor sales only or will you branch to the rest of clamp via the PROPERTIES not the technique itself of flying thunder god or yuko herself. could be the turning point of there fanfics and increase the number of NON YAOI stories to appear if you do well.

Second will clow have any relation in the elemental nation. Like right before he went to clow country. So roughly seven years at LEAST because there's how far tsubasa(male) turned back time. You could make it longer after all time moves differently in different dimensions.

be any look alike in the elemental nations or naruto world(dont forget that if you do so deep down tge soul is the same so if you make another sasuke his personality is still stiff if not cold a LITTLE like sayaoran.

Will we see any CLOSE interaction with the cards. Like naruto and sakura bonding/familiar contract with them.

Now that the MAJOR questions are done and if you read them again I thank you. Now to statements

were do the naruto sakura pairing them I apologize for my assumption. And if you decide to pair tomoyo with naruto or errol I want you to REMEMBER that the relationship between her and sakura is way closer then best friend s and even most siblings. She may never MORE then sakura even if it's not in the same way.

Also if you decide to write the first movie REMEMBER that SORCERESS did NOT love Clow or even have aname. Knowing that they were both powerful and seeing that they would look good together she sought him a as a suitor. Being spurned she sought him again only this time to kill him.

If you read this part as well then I thank you for having patients.

P.S. If I didnt make it clear earlier the clow reed from card captor sakura is the same from xxxholic and tsubasa. Yuko in volume one hints it(xxxholic) and she confirms it in volume 28(tsubasa)

P.S.S or P.P.S hitszusan is preordain but NOT fate. Even if you change things there are events that MUST happen. Even if you dont pair sakura and sayaoran together they must meet and at LEAST form a powerful bond. After all sakura and sayaoran loved each other tsubasa and tsubasa did and clone and clone did as well.
Guest chapter 7 . 3/1/2013
please update
Sakura chapter 6 . 2/9/2013
I love your story. It is great and full of actions. I never once thought that Naruto and Cardcaptor Sakura could really mix together so beautiful.

Two completely different animes forming into a wonderful and exciting story, full of adventure and promise.

And then... your story came along.

And it made me really happy to read it. I am now a fan of Naruto and CardCaptor Sakura stories.

And it is all because of you... for bring the story to life right before our eyes.

Though, I am somewhat hurt that the thought that you would not even consider mine or any other anonymous reviewers' ideas or suggestions for the story.

Like our ideas and thoughts mean nothing to you.

Now, I know that you have been hurt by other reviewers/flamers more than once... but please, don't take it out on the rest of us reviewers.

It make us anonymous reviewers feel like we don't even exist. Like we don't matter.

Please, at least... reconsider.
Alia chapter 5 . 2/9/2013
That was an intense chapter.

Alia
Alia chapter 4 . 2/9/2013
Cool chapter.

I really liked how you had Naruto using his clones to hide the broken door until Tomoyo had it fixed.

It does sounds just like something Naruto would do.

Until then,
Alia
Alia chapter 3 . 2/9/2013
Aww, poor Naruto... being practically beaten to death by WATERY. Well, it is a good thing that he heals fast.

Alia
LaLOLA chapter 7 . 2/9/2013
So, time was sending Naruto the dreams to forewarn him about the danger that is to come. And now, Syaoran knows about it as well. I wonder... will Syaoran now try to work with Naruto after that night? Or will he still give Naruto and the others the cold shoulder?
Tori chapter 6 . 2/9/2013
Oh no... now, Sakura and the others are noticing that there is something really wrong Naruto.

I hope Naruto recovers from this. And that Sakura, Tomoyo and Kero forgives him for not telling them about it.
rizaera chapter 5 . 2/9/2013
this story of yours is great. and has inspired me to write my own story.

so, thank you for writing the story and inspiring us all.
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