Reviews for Fragments
TonksftMemories chapter 1 . 2/6/2011
WOW.

This is spectacular.
ZephyrDragon chapter 1 . 7/10/2010
Oh no! Where did the -s go between each section? Did you take them out, or did they disappear of their own accord? ( They helped to break up the story so it doesn't look like just one huge block of writing.

Anyway! I love it, and as I already said, my favourite bit is crazy Bella counting the candlesticks and throwing one out the window . Very IC D xx