Reviews for Jewels Under The Sun
OtaOutau chapter 6 . 7/7
love your take on this, hope you finish it sometime
Lulumo chapter 6 . 6/28
I really like this especially how they're not always focusing their relationship and romance but goes slowly and nicely first friends and so on...

tho I don't really mind that Jacob is dominant one in bed since if Harry gives his permission why not. It's just normally if Jacob is dominant in their whole relationship that would be super weird. Harry is old, really old has centuries of life experience under his belt compare to Jacob who's literally puppy and childish. So if an adult who is more mature and has centuries experience is under control of teen boy that would be weird and very unrealistic.. so I think Harry should hold the leash in this relationship.

And this has bugged me long but what happened to their Magic, just because they became vampire doesn't mean their magic will just disappear. You said Bellatrix is vampire and death eater, which means she had her Magic and vampire powers. And then there's those like Bella who has mind block ability when she was human and it never disappear even when she'll became vampire, which means a part of you that has been with you since born won't disappear... so Evans should still have their Magic.. they should be Wizard-Vampire.. and still they never used any Magic not even wards...
natasha.jones.1654 chapter 6 . 6/19
When are you finishing this story?
trynmailme chapter 6 . 4/1
I absolutely love it.. Please update soon. Thanks
PaleAngel90 chapter 6 . 3/20
Liking the story, please update soon, cant wait to read more. :)
like-slash chapter 2 . 3/12
Urg Bella/Edward, i hate these two bimbos. Doesn't care about shit they bring only themselves. But your fanfic seems pretty interesting.
tat5934 chapter 6 . 1/29
I absolutely love your story! I can't believe I've started it even though I knew you'll probably never write the end. But I was hooked from the beginning...
I'm going to follow your story just in case ...
Tayzza6966 chapter 6 . 1/25
love this story. please update
Guest chapter 6 . 1/24
Love it! please update soon!
Aurora Selene Potter-Malfoy chapter 6 . 1/24
I know it's been awhile since you've updated this but I chose to read it anyways. This is a really interesting story and I'm hoping you get back to updating this. It would be nice to see how the relationship develops.
FalconLux chapter 6 . 12/11/2015
OMG, this is so good! And now there's no more and Harry and Jacob haven't even TALKED about the whole imprinting thing yet and I want more. *weeps hysterically*

I know it's been like three years, but... If you've any interest in continuing this, I'll beta it for you. I'm not registered as a beta at the moment, but for this story I will totally make an exception. I do have posted work though, if you want to check me out.

Anyway, this was really great. It's on a level that is fairly rare in the HP/Twilight crossover fandom. I find lots of fantastic ideas here, but not many that are well written or actually continued beyond 10,000 words or so. This was a refreshing find, and I dearly hope to see more of it at some point.
SinfulLies chapter 6 . 12/6/2015
*Looks at the last time you updated* *sighs* *stares blankly at wall* where are you? This story is actually wonderful and the fact that you left it on a cliffhanger, at least to me, is upsetting. It's long too! Where ever you are, please come back? This story is really good, like really, really good.
ram chapter 6 . 9/11/2015
More please
candy4beth chapter 6 . 8/11/2015
update this please
HPandPJnerd19568 chapter 6 . 8/5/2015
Hey...it's been three years now...so...could you maybe give a estimated time now, or...

Anyways, if you haven't died a fiery death, I'd be happy to Beta this story for you. It's very interesting. If you did die a violent death, then R.I.P.

-WeirdSuicidal19568
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