|Reviews for chirping|
| Pridemunkeyz chapter 1 . 10/23/2010
Awww...Kinda sappy tho...The salespeople I've met wouldn't have such a profound talk with me(Seriously, some of them just want to get on with it)
| Queen of everything pineapple chapter 1 . 10/3/2010
Awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww... so adorable!
| Chibi Kitt chapter 1 . 7/11/2010
It's a cute little one shot I really enjoyed it but I'd recommend revising it a bit your grammar and spelling were fine but you just told what happens try and show us such as when you said she gently eased out the front door that was a good image aim for more of that and at the start you sorta jumped around on the POV and tense so be careful there. Also on the third line the one starting with "here is Yuuki" get rid of that and instead say something like "Yuuki was tossing and turning dying to fall asleep but the incessant chirping of the birds kept waking her every time she was a bout to doze off." Keep writing with a bit of work you could be a great writer.
| thisisanoldaccountsoideletedit chapter 1 . 7/11/2010
This was really good, it would be awesome if you were to write a second chapter,
OR A SEQUEL!
ahhhhhhhhhh the possibilities are endless
| Nanako chapter 1 . 7/10/2010
This is really good! :)