Reviews for Part of the Whole
Guest chapter 1 . 9/13/2013
so cute I'm going to die! You've captured them perfectly. Bravo!
Gillian Deverone chapter 1 . 9/11/2012
Very sweet and the dialogue is spot on. Good job.
random shoes chapter 1 . 3/28/2011
Love it! You've really captured their precarious relationship, the way Josh is swaying back and forth between getting too close and pulling so far away that he hurts her. A beautiful gift and a nice little metaphor. I'm usually reluctant to read West Wing fanfiction (it feels weirdly sacred) but you're making me reconsider.
Tractor Girl chapter 1 . 7/12/2010
That was really lovely - so sweet.