|Reviews for Harry Potter and the Girl of Azarath|
| LilLinkGirl chapter 11 . 6/11
? So will there be more?
| Gregory Hanssen chapter 11 . 4/26
I love reading, and I will sign: the hell with SOPA & the socalled government, they try taking away the things we injoy, I love all of the stories I read in F.F.: GOD speed, and good luck.
| PsDuruyX chapter 10 . 11/4/2015
Great story thus far. Pls continue. I'm excited for another chapter! :)
| Priest chapter 10 . 9/18/2015
An interesting story I hope you plan on continuing it soon.
| WordSmyth chapter 3 . 4/20/2015
Dumbledore's speech was a bit off. When you write him, you have to pull your thoughts away from your undoubtedly teenaged mind, and think and write the way a century's old British wizard would speak. I sincerely doubt that dumbledorre would ever say "you guys" or "thanks" he'd say "all of you" and "thank you"
Otherwise, this is a fine story as far as I can tell. Keep up the good work.
| minerbuilder12 chapter 11 . 3/1/2015
| bilingualkyuubi chapter 1 . 1/9/2015
Was good except for the reading the leter part. Changing POV in middle of chapter does not create some cool effect, it breaks the flow of the story, and complicates the reading. To achieve the effect you looking for I would suggest 3rd person semi-omnichient, that is a 3rd person narrator the reveals the thoughts only of specific characters, its commonly seen in name a book to great effect.
| Mukuro234 chapter 11 . 10/27/2014
This is a pre good fic :)
| Angelofdarkness323 chapter 11 . 9/26/2014
OMG fuck those people who think fandoms are wrong
| x chapter 4 . 9/11/2014
| MasterShadowAssassin chapter 11 . 7/19/2014
It is a great story i hope you update soon-MSA
| SharpNote the FABULOUS chapter 11 . 10/4/2013
What's SOPA? I'm Canadian so, yeah. It specified on the link, "whitehouse" which would explain my cluelessness.
| Coogg chapter 11 . 8/25/2013
The link doesn't work.
| ButterflyMist chapter 11 . 8/25/2013
You can write my name down. It's so stupid! People are always telling you, 'Oh, be creative.' and then this happens!
| kiki chapter 10 . 8/12/2013
Please may i have some more. :)