Reviews for Godparents
P.T. Piranha chapter 1 . 8/15/2011
You seem to be missing a lot of commas, and mistaking 'then' and 'than'. It's very distracting.
ssadropout chapter 1 . 7/10/2010
Hee hee. I pity the poor photographer who had to snap that crew! This story is chock full of original ideas. I like how you thought of a reason for Paninya and Garfiel to be in the picture. I especially like your rationale for Ling outlawing polygamy. But Pinako! How could she do that to Shao May? xD