Reviews for Jumping Hurdles
Lattelady chapter 1 . 7/11/2010
Amazing story.

"Energy she could almost grasp in her fist. She'd imagined a more organized atmosphere-a neat, calm office, professional and orderly. Kept shelves, not cardboard boxes that nearly burst with signs, stickers, fresh blue balloons. The storefront shook with raw, fluid motion, and Donna let it fill her, seep into her blood until she breathed steadily. A part of the storm now, no longer swept up by it."

Great lines the way you wrote about the energy Donna needed to catch. AS I read it I kept picturing Donna, years later working on a different campaign, one without Josh and no energy.