Reviews for The Mystery of Danny Fenton
I no longer exist XP chapter 10 . 7/5/2016
How do you read hands?! I do not understand that... the hand bump bridge thing confused me...
Kurami Rocket chapter 3 . 1/15/2015
That's a interesting and unique legend there.
Kurami Rocket chapter 2 . 1/15/2015
This is good so far. Except, I really think it could have been better if u had started with how they met and slolwy show their bond forming. Also, u should be more descriptive.
Still though, enjoying this story :)
scheffelman chapter 2 . 10/23/2014
nice "It's a free country!" and "What are you, my mother?" jokes
scheffelman chapter 10 . 8/6/2014
Nice story. Will there be a sequel?
Rain of the Forest chapter 10 . 4/7/2013
Okay, this is a REALLY sad way to end a story...
Jack: So says the girl who won't even finish her YGO stories...
Rain of the Forest chapter 7 . 3/24/2013
Um, no offense, but in the last chapter, I distinctively remember Jazz being there when Danny FENTON had admitted that he and Phantom were brothers. She had even explained something to her father...
PsychoticNari chapter 10 . 7/28/2010
ending was...sort of small...but still good XD palm reading. Good job! ILoveThisStory la di da
Shadowy Flip Flops of DOOM chapter 9 . 7/27/2010
Ooh, I like it, I like it. :D
PsychoticNari chapter 9 . 7/27/2010
Danny was controlled by Undergrowth! What-! are you going to make a one-shot of that! *eyes sparkle* *cough* anyways...AWESOME CHAPTER! *hugs* UPDATE SOON!
XxTheUnspokenTruthxX chapter 1 . 7/25/2010
Good beginning. The description was great. Keep on writing!
Horselvr4evr123 chapter 6 . 7/24/2010
You know what's funny? I can sort of relate to the revelation of a new sibling/child. I found out about two weeks ago that I have an older half sister. Crazy, right? XD

Keep up the great work! PLEASE update soon!
PsychoticNari chapter 8 . 7/24/2010
*giggles* woot! AWESOME CHAPTER *hugs* *whispers* hell yeah for action!
PsychoticNari chapter 7 . 7/21/2010
WOOT WOOT! update soon or die! MUAHAHAHAHAHA! great chapter :D
PsychoticNari chapter 6 . 7/19/2010
Awwz, that part made me cry. Just thinking about losing a baby does that to me...

*sniff* i think i'm going to go hug my brother

update soon
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