Reviews for Numb
Mystia Katsuragi chapter 1 . 7/10/2012
I think Red would hate Green after what he's done to him in the main story, so this is really refreshing in comparison to the straight-out yaoi everywhere on FanFiction
CanalaveCoast chapter 1 . 9/28/2010
Great job; I really like this concept and the writting is actually very well done. If you'd like to still do a beta, I know it's probably been awhile, but I'll be glad to help out. xD

~CC
Involuntary Twitch chapter 1 . 8/24/2010
Hm, not bad. You've got some grammar and syntax errors, though, which are kind of distracting; getting a beta would help a lot, I bet. :3

It's pretty good, though. Keep writing! (Originalshipping especially, god I love this pairing so much)
anon chapter 1 . 7/11/2010
oops. I meant to say summary, I think I said title instead. (review hasn't shown up yet, so I don't know for sure if I made that mistake *sad faec*).

Well, whatever; you just got another review thanks to my mistake ;)
anon chapter 1 . 7/11/2010
I think you meant originalshipping in the title - not origin xD

origin is steven/wallace.
Unwritetobeunwritten chapter 1 . 7/11/2010
That was great! I really didn't see any mistakes.

And,you are so lucky! My laptop forbids me to go to Pixiv. I am envious.

Anyways, awesome.
ben4kevin chapter 1 . 7/11/2010
aaaaaawwwwwwww so sad yet sweet