Reviews for Tabu
thena-ditey chapter 1 . 10/22/2011
I wonder how many words there are for awesome? Amazing? I could leave a list, but that wouldn't suffice. Very, very well done. The raw intensity that never wavered. Lol look, ma! I'm waxing poetic! ;p
Agent Striker chapter 1 . 8/22/2011
love it, esp how they fought then started makin out!
Silvanne chapter 1 . 6/28/2011
"He's not fine because you can't stop yourself from projecting your disillusioned hatred for all things faith-based and compassionate upon hapless creatures such as an impressionable young man in the all-consuming glory of fledgling love."

How do you not love a man who utters that sentence?

I'll be in my bunk.
MadeOfStars chapter 1 . 4/28/2011
OMG, this is good. It is rough and raw and intense in a way we don't often see in them. I like seeing a little of Marshall-pushed-too-far and he is pretty hot, IMO. And Mary could get him there like that. I feel the set up is very realistic and believable (from the fight that started it all to the slap, even the making out in church). I love how you tied it up too, messily of course. Excellent work!
tilleygirl chapter 1 . 3/11/2011
What a wonderful, raw, taut, frenzied tumble through the emotions of Mary and Marshall. Mary, the only person who could push Marshall to these extremes. Marshall, the only person Mary cares enough about to have this depth of emotion for. The double edged sword of fear; fear of him leaving her, fear of him promising to stay. She just can't believe he would love her forever. Just stop fighting indeed.
drheart04 chapter 1 . 8/5/2010
Excellent! Think I'm jealous of Bujyo! lol
Profilerchic chapter 1 . 7/24/2010
Wow. Your writing style, that harsh,crude, yet passionate display of literature was... I don't know how to describe. :) Keep it up!
Michelle285 chapter 1 . 7/17/2010
This was amazing...not sure the rating should have been M...but regardless this was great! :) I have always thought Marshall was going to explode someday. He's right, Mary keeps pushing and pushing and one day I knew this was going to happen, and you captured the explosion perfectly! :) I just loved this story! And it was perfect to end with them together...because that's how it should be! :) Great job!
Amanda Hart chapter 1 . 7/14/2010
Amazing. Bravo. I think you captured the essence of these two characters perfectly, especially Marshall. That desperate pleading he had at the end especially; my heart skipped a beat.

Very well done.
Yogi Dee chapter 1 . 7/11/2010
Oh, dear. Is there going to be more? I do hope so, because this is a fabulous little piece, and I have precious few other forms of entertainment! Outstanding!
BrittanyLS chapter 1 . 7/11/2010
"Just stop fighting."

That is such a perfect Marshal thing to say to her! I could see him saying that to her! I hope she listens.
Kira S. Night chapter 1 . 7/11/2010
OH my god! This story is amazing! I could fell it!
roar526 chapter 1 . 7/11/2010
Still as powerful and chilling on the second read through. The scene was brilliantly set and the characters spot on. Mary's reactions were very much Mary and Marshall's words were beautifully woven.
Betherzz chapter 1 . 7/11/2010
really good one... the 2 of them kill me... shes gotta figure it out because one day shes going to look up and hes going to be gone and how would that make her feel? worse than trying to get that happy ending... thanks for the good read
hester alabama chapter 1 . 7/11/2010
Oh god-so intense and beautiful and painful all at the same time. I loved it I wish I could keep reading... I might just go read it again! Thank you for sharing!
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