Reviews for The Dark Chosen One
shadow of balance chapter 5 . 11/3
The fic is totally awesome. i mean how much unique can you get...please continue this fic.. this is a work of art...
Mokkel chapter 5 . 6/3
i just hope that one day you come back to this story and finally complete this work of art
i mean seriously it's not everyday that you come across such an original fanfic
aj2554 chapter 5 . 5/19
please continue this
dragon satoshi ketchum 0112 chapter 1 . 1/5
I like it update it, and if you are leaving this please don't leave it ok.
ninjabanana0 chapter 5 . 9/21/2014
This story is freakibg awesome...i dont see why you discobtinued your stories they are all great.
Arceus08 chapter 5 . 7/4/2014
for passion why not use elena? your own oc in your sories fallen master and secrets
Latios4ev3r chapter 5 . 1/6/2014
This is a great and wonderful story. Extremely original. The calculated diction, the cunningness of the characters' personality and attitude. It is simple nothing less than astounding.

Heart-Anabel
Reason:She is able to sense peoples' feelings and even has feelings for him. A canon shipping.

Will-May
Reason:May has strived towards her goal to become a great coordinator, and in the end either won or came close to winning the grand festival. My otp is Pearlshipping, though I don't think it would work in this situation.

Mind-Sabrina
Reason:Sabrina was, keyword was, very cold and calculating. She is still very calculating but no longer cold.

Spirit-Cynthia
Reason: Cynthia is very cool and collected, but she also is very understanding.

Soul-Bianca (Pokemon Heroes movie, not Klutzy Mc Klutz)
Reason: Bianca and her grandfather had known about the legendary pokemon Latios and Latias and not bothered to try to catch them, yet they also took care of them and took great caution keeping the Eon duo's secret.

Passion-Unknown
Reason: Unable to compute which kind of passion. Passion for battling or passion for searching for love?
ThatOneEpicGinge chapter 5 . 12/28/2013
Damnit update the story!
Guest chapter 5 . 12/6/2013
Dawn, Misty, May, Cynthia, and Iris. You can make them however you like it but must be close or can be the same looking.
Gemini-Spark chapter 5 . 9/29/2013
Anabel she asked Ash to read her heart so she should represent the heart.
Latias she should be the soul because when a Latias or Latios dies there will turn into a Soul Dew
Darklight9999 chapter 5 . 3/18/2013
Great chap! But 'thought' and 'taught' are two separate things... Please remember this!
DarkJumper chapter 5 . 7/6/2012
I hope you update again soon.
The other 6 I like are Anabel, Dawn, May, Cythia, Zoey and Angie.
Shadowangelknight chapter 5 . 7/1/2012
you could have cynthia be spirit or will, anabel(battle frontier) or sabrina(kanto) be mind, and oc from one of your other stories such as selene be soul or heart. Can you please tell me when you plan to update this story because thinking of the countless ways this story can go is quite nerve wracking because i cant anticipate what comes next but that is what is exciting watching all your stories form is very entertaining.
dark knight chapter 5 . 10/21/2011
For suggestions I would choose girls that like Ash but have not been in a lot of fan fictions with him like Melody of Samorati Island, Bianca of Altomare, Greta of the Battle Frontier, Macey from the Johto League, Solidad from Hoenn, Zoey of Sinnoh. Reasons each can fit the role you placed, and this could make the story a lot more interesting.
shadowbreeze chapter 5 . 10/19/2011
the story was at a peak moment and then you stopped writing for this; you're a great author and the story is awesome but you haven't uploaded in a year so did you abandon these fics or is it on hiatus? at least announce your decision so that people can know
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