|Reviews for Peanut Ronde with Ginger Soup|
| Queen Phantomhive chapter 1 . 7/12/2010
I think this snack in Chinese is called tang yuan, a very traditional Chinese food that the Chinese will eat during dongzhi.
Hahaha, sorry, I like Chinese traditions.
| Alternative Angel chapter 1 . 7/11/2010
A bit short, but it would have been ruined if it were longer.
You capitalized things unnecessarily, such as "Bamboo," "Blue," "Honey-Brown," etc. Otherwise, it was fairly well written, if not for mistakes in tenses.
Tsuna certainly is in character, though I can't say the same for Mukuro.
Mukuro's just a little too sweet and honest, when he's actually a confusing jumble, misleading you to the very end.
It works well for this one-shot though, so I don't think the OOCness is too terrible a thing.
I liked the gentle feelings this fic invoked, and- much like your peanut ronde with ginger soup- it warmed me up inside.
You didn't state feelings, leaving them implied; I like that a lot in a story.
Hopefully you'll write more for this pairing; I'm currently conflicted over my OTP, so I'm looking for guidance.