Reviews for Beloveds
Guest chapter 26 . 3/19
Awww, abusive sex is so romantic!
Guest chapter 21 . 3/19
When a penis rams a cervix, it causes pain, not pleasure. Please do more research before writing sex.
Guest chapter 19 . 3/19
Oh good God, bondage? Really? What are you, 15?
Guest chapter 18 . 3/19
What part of "I don't want to" does Gideon not understand?
Guest chapter 17 . 3/19
Abraxas doesn't sound like a very good lover.
Guest chapter 16 . 3/19
So Hermione knows nothing about sex at all yet knows to ram her finger in his ass? That's rather inconsistent, wouldn't you say? A Veela Tale is still by far your best story.
Guest chapter 10 . 3/19
Note: women do not like "tasting themselves". It's gross.
ktbori chapter 33 . 3/13
Amazing story, thank you for shared it with us :-)
Ali989969 chapter 23 . 2/22
I don't know if you're still writing, but as much as I love this story, one thing glaringly stands out. A gelding is a CASTRATED male horse. He would have nothing to hump the white mare with. If you can edit, I would recommend changing gelding to stallion. I grew up on a farm. Little things like that stand out for me.
Rosajean chapter 33 . 2/17
Great story! I enjoyed it a lot!
Guest chapter 33 . 1/28
That was just fabulous.
Guest chapter 20 . 1/28
It is really unclear why her five husbands are so certain that they are less able to conceive with her than Luscious is.

Oopsies. *Lucius
Mc111 chapter 33 . 6/30/2014
Great story! A bit different from the one on GE. But still great!
Mc111 chapter 1 . 6/29/2014
Love this story! Have read it many times on Granger enchanted.
Kandace chapter 33 . 6/12/2014
I JUST LOVED IT SO FUCKING MUCH!

At first I had to think becuase I didnt know how the "bloody hell" that would work. Then I was just like I LOVE IT! I made soooo many outloud comments.

And let me just say she is soooo very very lucky.

Hehe ok byebye
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