Reviews for Beloveds
Ali989969 chapter 23 . 2/22
I don't know if you're still writing, but as much as I love this story, one thing glaringly stands out. A gelding is a CASTRATED male horse. He would have nothing to hump the white mare with. If you can edit, I would recommend changing gelding to stallion. I grew up on a farm. Little things like that stand out for me.
Rosajean chapter 33 . 2/17
Great story! I enjoyed it a lot!
Guest chapter 33 . 1/28
That was just fabulous.
Guest chapter 20 . 1/28
It is really unclear why her five husbands are so certain that they are less able to conceive with her than Luscious is.

Oopsies. *Lucius
Mc111 chapter 33 . 6/30/2014
Great story! A bit different from the one on GE. But still great!
Mc111 chapter 1 . 6/29/2014
Love this story! Have read it many times on Granger enchanted.
Kandace chapter 33 . 6/12/2014
I JUST LOVED IT SO FUCKING MUCH!

At first I had to think becuase I didnt know how the "bloody hell" that would work. Then I was just like I LOVE IT! I made soooo many outloud comments.

And let me just say she is soooo very very lucky.

Hehe ok byebye
roon0 chapter 33 . 1/19/2014
What a brilliant story. Thank you.
Fullofpassion09 chapter 21 . 12/13/2013
So I'm not complaining about pulling luscious Lucius into the fold, and I'm not afraid to admit I'm jealous of the lucky witch, but I'm confused as to why one of the five original couldn't get her pregnant? She mentioned something about 2 years before they could but why would a spell that matches so completely have that negative of a consequence? Loving all your stories so far!
Mila Pink chapter 33 . 9/30/2013
This is a fascinating story.
All were happy and had fantastic sex.
I'm loving reading your stories.
Kisses
punkyredhead chapter 33 . 9/24/2013
Wonderous story. Loved it.
uwishuwerecool chapter 33 . 9/23/2013
story im a bit sad now but happy :D
1weasleyfan chapter 33 . 8/15/2013
I really like this story great job well done.
nikyta chapter 33 . 6/9/2013
love ittttttttttttttt
Booker10 chapter 33 . 6/6/2013
awww thi made me sad:( this was really good:) Loved Gideon;)
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