Reviews for Beloveds
laexdream chapter 3 . 6/7
I just realized you actually completed this story. Man, I love you. After reading most of your stories, I can honestly say that you're one of my favourite Harry Potter FF authors. I love the whole Hermione Harem niche, and you cater to my desires very well. Lol... If you've any stories to reccomend me... I'm all for some sharing xD.
laexdream chapter 2 . 6/6
At least she didn't revive Tom Riddle. LOL. I love these kinda stories though. Too bad she didn't bond with both Gideon and Fabian. Thanks for the story.
Guest chapter 1 . 5/9
Well that sounded abusive.
Draco lover forever 1994 chapter 33 . 4/12
Well you did it once again love the story can't wait to read more try more like this loved it mpre
Guest chapter 26 . 3/19
Awww, abusive sex is so romantic!
Guest chapter 21 . 3/19
When a penis rams a cervix, it causes pain, not pleasure. Please do more research before writing sex.
Guest chapter 19 . 3/19
Oh good God, bondage? Really? What are you, 15?
Guest chapter 18 . 3/19
What part of "I don't want to" does Gideon not understand?
Guest chapter 17 . 3/19
Abraxas doesn't sound like a very good lover.
Guest chapter 16 . 3/19
So Hermione knows nothing about sex at all yet knows to ram her finger in his ass? That's rather inconsistent, wouldn't you say? A Veela Tale is still by far your best story.
Guest chapter 10 . 3/19
Note: women do not like "tasting themselves". It's gross.
ktbori chapter 33 . 3/13
Amazing story, thank you for shared it with us :-)
Ali989969 chapter 23 . 2/22
I don't know if you're still writing, but as much as I love this story, one thing glaringly stands out. A gelding is a CASTRATED male horse. He would have nothing to hump the white mare with. If you can edit, I would recommend changing gelding to stallion. I grew up on a farm. Little things like that stand out for me.
Rosajean chapter 33 . 2/17
Great story! I enjoyed it a lot!
Guest chapter 33 . 1/28
That was just fabulous.
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