Reviews for Say you want me back but you never do
eSJa chapter 1 . 7/15/2010
I don't normally like song based fics but I do this one!

It fits your theme and feeling very well, adding to the tone and characterization.

It's a very haunting drabble and the way it ends is very sweet but a little creepy, totally in a good way though!
SkywardGratis chapter 1 . 7/13/2010
Interesting story, it's a different pairing for me. I liked the ending though. Well done.
Princess.Nemo chapter 1 . 7/13/2010
I love this!

Very nice, and it works well with the song.

Nice job :D

xxx
ACCT REMOVED chapter 1 . 7/12/2010
I liked it for mutliple reasons.

A.) It's an unheard of pairing

B.) In the end she sacrificed herself for him

C.) By stealing his death she unknowingly left him with insanity.

Really great story :)
mew-tsubaki chapter 1 . 7/11/2010
Haha, well, I love you loads for writing this! XD (Originally, when you first posted, I moved faster than the site and it wasn't up yet so I couldn't snag the first review... *sniffs* But here I am!) ;3

The song lyrics were really nice and help to explain Mar's emotions and mood. I mean, you're just in...that place, you know?, when he doesn't stay. And I feel so much for poor Marlene. :(

(Love the Sirius mention, btw!)

Honestly, she wasn't stupid, dumb, or naive-she was in love and thought he was, too. I love that you said she was always Frank's and that she at least got his death in that one scene. That last line really sticks with your readers, Pooja.

Bril work as always. ;3 You MUST do more with them!

-mew! XD
The Fourth Black Sister chapter 1 . 7/11/2010
Great ending! I loved this it was awesome!:D
Ninja Potter chapter 1 . 7/11/2010
Passionate. I never thought of this pairing and I really like it!
Anmylica chapter 1 . 7/11/2010
Wow, this is the first I've read a story about Marlene McKinnon, let alone a Frank/Marlene. Somehow, her character is really overlooked, and that's such a shame. Considering how we know little about her, I think you did very well with this.

~Anmylica
Morghen chapter 1 . 7/11/2010
You did a really great job with this pairing. I have never considered Marlene loving Frank but I think it makes a nice pairing, onesided or not. I liked how she never stopped loving him even though he had only used her. The last sentence was so powerful and it was the perfect ending to this story. Good job!

-Morghen
Paper Pearls chapter 1 . 7/11/2010
A fantastic portrayal of the kind of desperation unrequited love causes. It was an intriguing story with a great deal of charge to it, and I loved every word. I felt for Marlene, in particular during the last line.
I'm-A-Lebanese chapter 1 . 7/11/2010
i enjoyed it, it was really well written(: