Reviews for Will you be my daddy? |
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![]() ![]() ![]() I just have a question where can you find the sequel to this story I can't seem to find in. Just wondering that's all. |
![]() ![]() Found this all kinda lame tbh. |
![]() ![]() What if it was ron |
![]() ![]() ![]() I believe Draco should've been smart enough to realise that just because he knew about mpreg being possible and his always been gay, he shouldn't have expected Harry to just be automatically be okay with being pregnant when he didn't swing that way in the beginning, it wasn't fair. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I was starting to hate Harry a little bit for depressing my darling teddy |
![]() ![]() How could Draco divorce Daphne when he was married to her sister Astoria? You seem to have stuck with the books for everything else, why would you change that? |
![]() ![]() Okay.. I like where this is going |
![]() ![]() The idea is great, but the execution is sad. The lack of logic for me played a far from positive role. If the first twenty chapters were read thoroughly, then the rest were flipped through solely in order to understand the essence and find out the finale. I don't like leaving stories unfinished in my head. It was very strange for me that Potter told the head of the Aurors about Snape, and later he could not tell his colleagues about him, because they would not calm down until they found him and brought him to justice. Ummm.. Why aren't they looking for him at the moment? In addition, the text uses the spell "lead me to so-and-so" several times. It was possible to reach Snape like that, what's the problem? I was also very "pleased" with the evening dedicated to the victory. For some reason, there were plenty of Slytherins, since Daphne, and Blaze, and Draco figured, but not a single moment about Harry's meeting with former classmates, Order members, etc. did not have. That is, their partnership with Malfoy and the unborn child shocked everyone, but no one even came up to say hello. Interesting. Next is a big question for the witch doctor. He uttered one spell and there are already results for the fetus. What's the point of going to him then? Harry, who is suddenly addicted to the cure, couldn't find those spells or what? Of course, I understand everything, but in the magical world, a pregnancy test should somehow be rationally passed, and not just through Mungo somewhere in a week ... And I want to note that the author did not succeed in living characters. They are cardboard, even though we can all imagine each of them well. |
![]() ![]() Hallo |
![]() ![]() Overrated and mediocre for most part. Some good and funny bits but too few. |
![]() ![]() So... um who was the killer? |
![]() ![]() I KNEW IT! |
![]() ![]() ![]() THIS CHAPTER WAS EVERYTHING I WANTED! So precious! I loved it! The boys talking about family! OMG! THIS CHAPTER WAS EVERYTHING I WANTED! So precious! I loved it! |
![]() ![]() ![]() alright, I really enjoyed your fic and thank you. also, -sigh- harry you idiot... |
![]() ![]() ![]() we will never know how snape acquired certain things |