Reviews for Will you be my daddy?
love edward percy edsme eragon chapter 45 . 3/26
I just have a question where can you find the sequel to this story I can't seem to find in. Just wondering that's all.
Rosie3745 chapter 45 . 3/11
Found this all kinda lame tbh.
Max chapter 28 . 3/1
What if it was ron
Era Aonsa chapter 34 . 3/1
I believe Draco should've been smart enough to realise that just because he knew about mpreg being possible and his always been gay, he shouldn't have expected Harry to just be automatically be okay with being pregnant when he didn't swing that way in the beginning, it wasn't fair.
Era Aonsa chapter 11 . 2/27
I was starting to hate Harry a little bit for depressing my darling teddy
Greg chapter 1 . 12/31/2022
How could Draco divorce Daphne when he was married to her sister Astoria? You seem to have stuck with the books for everything else, why would you change that?
Shukushaka chapter 1 . 12/26/2022
Okay.. I like where this is going
Lin chapter 45 . 11/15/2022
The idea is great, but the execution is sad.
The lack of logic for me played a far from positive role. If the first twenty chapters were read thoroughly, then the rest were flipped through solely in order to understand the essence and find out the finale. I don't like leaving stories unfinished in my head.
It was very strange for me that Potter told the head of the Aurors about Snape, and later he could not tell his colleagues about him, because they would not calm down until they found him and brought him to justice. Ummm.. Why aren't they looking for him at the moment? In addition, the text uses the spell "lead me to so-and-so" several times. It was possible to reach Snape like that, what's the problem?
I was also very "pleased" with the evening dedicated to the victory. For some reason, there were plenty of Slytherins, since Daphne, and Blaze, and Draco figured, but not a single moment about Harry's meeting with former classmates, Order members, etc. did not have. That is, their partnership with Malfoy and the unborn child shocked everyone, but no one even came up to say hello. Interesting.
Next is a big question for the witch doctor. He uttered one spell and there are already results for the fetus. What's the point of going to him then? Harry, who is suddenly addicted to the cure, couldn't find those spells or what? Of course, I understand everything, but in the magical world, a pregnancy test should somehow be rationally passed, and not just through Mungo somewhere in a week ...
And I want to note that the author did not succeed in living characters. They are cardboard, even though we can all imagine each of them well.
Guest chapter 4 . 8/1/2022
Sybian Ryder chapter 45 . 4/28/2022
Overrated and mediocre for most part. Some good and funny bits but too few.
ConfusED chapter 1 . 2/27/2022
So... um who was the killer?
Guest chapter 42 . 1/17/2022
CCDeVill chapter 16 . 1/13/2022
So precious! I loved it! The boys talking about family! OMG!
So precious! I loved it!
Obsidianshadow89 chapter 45 . 1/4/2022
alright, I really enjoyed your fic and thank you. also, -sigh- harry you idiot...
Obsidianshadow89 chapter 44 . 1/4/2022
we will never know how snape acquired certain things
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