Reviews for Will you be my daddy?
Lin chapter 45 . 11/15
The idea is great, but the execution is sad.
The lack of logic for me played a far from positive role. If the first twenty chapters were read thoroughly, then the rest were flipped through solely in order to understand the essence and find out the finale. I don't like leaving stories unfinished in my head.
It was very strange for me that Potter told the head of the Aurors about Snape, and later he could not tell his colleagues about him, because they would not calm down until they found him and brought him to justice. Ummm.. Why aren't they looking for him at the moment? In addition, the text uses the spell "lead me to so-and-so" several times. It was possible to reach Snape like that, what's the problem?
I was also very "pleased" with the evening dedicated to the victory. For some reason, there were plenty of Slytherins, since Daphne, and Blaze, and Draco figured, but not a single moment about Harry's meeting with former classmates, Order members, etc. did not have. That is, their partnership with Malfoy and the unborn child shocked everyone, but no one even came up to say hello. Interesting.
Next is a big question for the witch doctor. He uttered one spell and there are already results for the fetus. What's the point of going to him then? Harry, who is suddenly addicted to the cure, couldn't find those spells or what? Of course, I understand everything, but in the magical world, a pregnancy test should somehow be rationally passed, and not just through Mungo somewhere in a week ...
And I want to note that the author did not succeed in living characters. They are cardboard, even though we can all imagine each of them well.
Guest chapter 4 . 8/1
Sybian Ryder chapter 45 . 4/28
Overrated and mediocre for most part. Some good and funny bits but too few.
ConfusED chapter 1 . 2/27
So... um who was the killer?
Guest chapter 42 . 1/17
CCDeVill chapter 16 . 1/13
So precious! I loved it! The boys talking about family! OMG!
So precious! I loved it!
Obsidianshadow89 chapter 45 . 1/4
alright, I really enjoyed your fic and thank you. also, -sigh- harry you idiot...
Obsidianshadow89 chapter 44 . 1/4
we will never know how snape acquired certain things
Obsidianshadow89 chapter 40 . 1/4
I feel like there is something wrong when people brush aside the fact that the guy who kidnapped harry (who is also a murderer) injected harry with a pregnancy potion and let him go (along with not paying attention to any hints given, but that's on harry especially since he hasn't mentioned them aside from the first letter).
Obsidianshadow89 chapter 29 . 1/4
wouldn't Daphne Zabini be addressed as Mrs. and not Miss?
ChuCooCooDoo chapter 19 . 11/18/2021
Mocking those who are differently abled is seriously not cool.
Mahaley Olson chapter 20 . 11/6/2021
rosemary62442 chapter 14 . 11/4/2021
what happened to Andromeda...? why didn't he go to inform her about Teddy and him staying at Malfoy Manor or removing him from his school? so far, it looks pike she's the legal guardian for Teddy, and spending times with Malfoys, never mind moving temporarily to their home is somethig she should know...
and is Narcissa dead?
rosemary62442 chapter 12 . 11/4/2021
why is he suddenly calling Draco papa...? it was daddy at first
michelle2000 chapter 42 . 10/31/2021
sorry harry but if you truly believe he hasnt been a bad son then there's something really wrong with you. this is the first time I have ever disliked a book character so much. like teddy has done nothing to change my mind at all. he's really irritating and annoying and I dont know how you guys can still stand him ew his behaviour is/has been fucking disgusting for a while now. I really hope he changes soon. can't imagine my child acting this way and not punishing him/her
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