Reviews for The Rate of Change
purple vortex9 chapter 1 . 10/23/2013
That was amazing! I loved the last line... so much meaning behind such few words. good job
Calcyfer chapter 1 . 6/6/2011
This is love. I love how you wrote it. :]
Mute Wordsmith chapter 1 . 9/8/2010
This is good! The last line is my favourite part.
VadeRetro chapter 1 . 8/9/2010
Wow, I love this a lot! :)

Put it in my favorites! *_*
Mendori-chan chapter 1 . 8/7/2010
I like it. It's so simple, and so steady that its essence shines out wonderfully. :) It deserves to be put into my favorites.
MissAkari chapter 1 . 7/25/2010
I liked this. Though I'm not to sure to who this poem refers.

The final line was my favorite.