|Reviews for Guts|
| laurenparade chapter 2 . 7/14/2010
Chapter two def lived up to my expectations. I kind of guessed at how/why Bella got locked in a loony bin, and my guess was pretty accurate...at least so far.
I dunno if I already mentioned, but I love the flow of your writing. It's almost poetic; similar to Ellen Hopkins, if you've read her stuff.
| mighty-moo chapter 2 . 7/14/2010
I love this story. Can't wait to see what happens!
| BellsNWhistles4Edward chapter 1 . 7/11/2010
um, yesss please.
| laurenparade chapter 1 . 7/11/2010
I like this. A lot, actually. It's interesting enough to get hooked into reading all of the chapter, but vague enough to make me want to know how it'll continue and, eventually, end. It's a brilliant first chapter so naturally I'm a little excited about what's to come. Besides, I get a sick, twisted kick out of stories revolving around mental institutions.
My only nitpick-y problem is a few grammatical errors. Nothing major, but I'm anal enough to see 'em. But some of them are...perfect for the way the words flow.
So...yeah. Keep on keepin' on.