Reviews for On the Horizon
TwilightSky15 chapter 4 . 6/19/2011
wow...this is...wow! please continue!
HallieAnna Lissette chapter 4 . 8/17/2010
I love alex. You need to keep him. But You shouldn't really go into the same triangle as bella jake and edward...that would kill poor jake. lol Mabye have alex become a part...um yeah this is hard. lol Or yeah no! Make Jacob the Edwardish dude this time but have him stay jake!That way jake gets the girl and can know how edward felt with Bella. Their imprint being like the blood between bella and edward! Turn the tables and have Alex end up the jakelike character but with edward characteristics(or totally differnt ones) then have him get mixed up turned into a vampire and...get fxed up with a single vamp(mabye a best friend of nessies?) Drama! lol sorry. Brain overload. lol. Take what you widh from my idea even if its nothing. Love this story keep it up! :)
HallieAnna Lissette chapter 3 . 8/1/2010
I reallllllllly like this story! :) Keep it up!
Sweetie7smiled chapter 2 . 7/13/2010
Good chapter! Interesting situation!
sheelbyyy chapter 2 . 7/13/2010
MOOOOOOOOOOOOOORRRRREEEEEE!
HallieAnna Lissette chapter 1 . 7/12/2010
Love you and your new idea! Go with it girl :0)