Reviews for Monsters in the Closet
UndergroundDaydreams chapter 1 . 9/4/2011
I liked this story, the shared connection/history between Sarah and Toby even though he doesn't really remember. But he knows. And the idea that she's waiting, and he's waiting, and maybe Jareth's waiting - just promises, maybe empty, waiting to be fulfilled. Enjoyed it. Thanks for writing & sharing. :)
N1nj4 Grrrl chapter 1 . 7/11/2010
This is a good story and is well written. Just a little note on the whole Karen/Irene thing though. I heard that her "official" name is Irene, but in the beginning of the movie, Sarah's dad said, "Karen and I were worried about you!". Don't know if this matters or not, but thought I'd just toss it out there :-) Thanks for the story!
Shizuku Tsukishima749 chapter 1 . 7/11/2010
Wow! That was so cool! *U* Rock on! I didn't notice anything, but then I didn't get much sleep, so... XD Really, though, the characterization (especially making older Toby), plot, references to Jareth/the Labyrinth, etc...it was all so AMAZING! *U* Completely brilliant work!