|Reviews for Pokemon:Episode Zero|
| Nauran chapter 8 . 5/31/2011
Whoa! Talk about effort...
Seems like you just keep getting longer and better with every chapter! That kinda thing is VERY rare to come by.
I can't really constructively criticise anything, since everything's in pretty good shape and is going on a solid path. All I can say is do your best, keep the OC screentime (pagetime) equal among them, and give it your all to finish it off!
| Twilight- The Moon Spirit chapter 6 . 1/27/2011
I'm not a fan of high and mighty characters. A mistake is a mistake and most pokemon battles can and will be devasting to the envroment. For example if Noctis' dark pulse had been dodge than it would most likey cause just as much damage to another pokemon.
Once again not really a flame but just telling you (if you haven't noticed yet between this and your other story, I'm very picky)
| Twilight- The Moon Spirit chapter 4 . 1/27/2011
Can you PM me if OC's are still allowed? I'd hate to send one in just for them to not be excepted anymore.
| Twilight- The Moon Spirit chapter 3 . 1/27/2011
This is not a flame
Um I have a bit of a problem with over mysterious characters. It's okay if a person can't read him, acceptable if a pokemon can't read him, but annoying when a legend can't read him.
Also your character is a bit Gary Stuish so far. He's smart, legends love him, powerful pokemon, can cook, can easily hold his own in tough situations... not saying he can't be like that but most people enjoy it when you grow into a perfect character instead of starting as one.
Not a flame just my thoughts as of now...
| HeadMageMai chapter 8 . 10/18/2010
NICE ONCE AGAIN! XD
Keep up the updates! I'm counting on u!
| Aoi Hyoudou chapter 8 . 10/17/2010
Very Interestin _
I see Brock made an appearance xD
| The Fan Fiction Writer chapter 8 . 10/16/2010
Awesome chapter an absolutely awesome chapter. The battles kept me on the edge of my seat and I really love Seishiro's peronality. I see you introduced Subaru, I cant wait to see him again :)
| hannyfish chapter 8 . 10/16/2010
It was never too long! It was brilliant!
Why do I keep thinking there's a legendary in the egg?... hmm...
| hannyfish chapter 7 . 9/12/2010
I'm sorry i took so long to review! i had no idea you had updated! it was a brilliant chapter as usual! hope you do well in your trials!
| The Fan Fiction Writer chapter 7 . 9/7/2010
This was sick,sadistic, violent ... me likey :D. Seriously that was awesome! That Zoroark is awesome, I wonder what is wrong with Seishiro though...
| Silver Don chapter 7 . 9/7/2010
It is an interesting way that you create plot progress. there is a definate shurity on the plot and how the newest abilities will be introduced and finally mastered. i was somewhat amazed in the way that you brought the legendary pokemon: making it look like a mercyless, blood thirsty monster. something that powerful should be expected to have a similar type trainer...
| The Fan Fiction Writer chapter 6 . 8/30/2010
I have re-read this chapter. The battle was great and the description in this story is awesome
| Thomas3Garchomp chapter 6 . 8/28/2010
Mmmm...interesting. Is Alice just a one shot character or will she come back?
Your battle scenes are very detailed. Nice.
| hannyfish chapter 6 . 8/28/2010
Liked it a lot! It was worth waiting for! I hope Rowan appears again soon ;)
| HeadMageMai chapter 6 . 8/28/2010
Nice chapter desho~! ;D
I loveeeee the way u introduced my OC, to put it in a simple form, wonderful! I hope Alice appears again in ur story, if u want... thanks for letting my OC in again!