Reviews for Bereavement
totallyobsessed chapter 1 . 11/21/2012
OMG! i ABSOLUTELY NEED to know what happened next! i'll probably DIE if i don't know (sort of like Black). i think that "creature" was a Zerkrom, am i right? i think Black really will die, and i'm not so sure about the name-remembering part. OMG, why can't Black remember his childhood friend's name?! it's just 5 letters! W-H-I-T-E, White! for goodness sake Black, you can't remember her name!? and how come Black can't remember anything? is it because of death being near? maybe, maybe not. oh well, the most i can hope for is for you to continue this story fast. happy thanksgiving! XO XD XP
True M. Vega chapter 1 . 7/8/2012
There is much power in your words...I really liked this.
aestheticisms chapter 1 . 7/12/2010
You're getting better at the grammar aspect of writing Just a bit more practice!

I thought this was a great story, it's tragic, and you're able to communicate their sadness and confusion through the page.