I love this coupling! Leena and Bit are just not good together cuz Bit doesn't reslly show that he has any interest in her, but anyways that was a really good fanfic for having been sick while writing it. I wouldn't be able to anything if I was sick. :D Very cute, but like you said before it would be great to reedit and revise it cuz in some parts I really was getting lost in what was happening.

KEEP IT UP!

I read this ages ago...and finally found it again recently. And look, I'm finally getting around to reviewing it!

...just really, really late.

I'm afraid that it isn't the most insightful of reviews, though.

But this is one of the better fics I've seen with this pairing...if you can even call it as much. I think you did a good job keeping them in character, and I loved the "Door! Door! Door!" alarm and her jumping on the packages when the rest of the team got back.

Whooooo! This is a great Harry/Leena fic! I love it! This is one of the first hetrosexual zoids fics I read, keep it up! _

lol! That was cute!

Ah and this is the story that inspeires me to write a HL in the first place.

This is going to be on my favorites list.

(Feeling envy of your perfect grammer..).

cute fic! i love it!

Wow, that was really good! In fact, I was so into the story that I forgot I was sitting on my foot ;; Now it's asleep... Oh man, the pins and needles hurt so bad!

*blushes* Me, an inspiration? *blushes even harder* Don't worry, I'm working on Wonderland right now! *nods*

I loved this! The characterization was perfect, grammar and spelling was perfect, and, heck, the whole thing was perfect! (And, yes, Bit *does* scream incredibly high-pitched - at least, in the dub he does.) I suppose I'm prejudiced to liking it because of it being a Harry/Leena, but...I adore it. Favorites List!

You mentioned in the author's notes that this was part of something bigger...I hope you're working on it!

And now, a silly moment: yaaaaaaay! I loved it! Hugs for Rinon Toros-san!

~PallaPlease. [Fighting chickens is the stupidest thing you can do - look what happens in Zelda: Link's Awakening! They kill you!]

Cute story!

Poor Leena and Harry. I know how they feel, I have a cold now too. Anyways, great fic.

Well, now all the Harry and Lena lovers are gonna want ta kill me but any ways...I don't know why I read tHis fic! Maybe it's cause I thought I should give ya a chance, you being on , and wanting to write Zoids fics and all, and I give you credit! You are a talented author! {Evil 1, tell them they would be better if they wrote a B/L!} Excuse me! [Shut up brain! I am trying to get along w/ them!] {oh..okay..sorry...traitor!} Any way, I agree I don't like Harry and Lena as a couple, you can just tell she hates him! But, your fic disevers a chance as much as you do. So, Harry and Lena fans: This author is for you! Her fic is incredable, and they bring the word "fiction" to life! _ see? I didn't flame!

{I'm gonna order our body to shoot you!} *smiles* [please do!]*keeps smiling* [Yo brain! That bullet isn't coming fast enough!] {I'm working on it!} *keeps smiling* _