|Reviews for The Untold Story of Alex Snape|
| RebeccaSeverusSnape chapter 18 . 8/23/2010
This was a nice chapter, I loved it, well done :)
| Elfsquire90 chapter 17 . 8/21/2010
I like it, in fact if I have one complaint it's that it's short and I want more. I love this story. update as soon as you can please
| Jemima123 chapter 17 . 8/21/2010
Heya...just read your story again and loved it. The scened with Draco was excellent, love the way he keeps on contradicting himself :) Update soon ;)
| snape011997 chapter 17 . 8/21/2010
AHHHHHHH THE SUSPENSE IS KILLING ME! thats all i can say :)
| lovedracomalfoy chapter 17 . 8/21/2010
im cureus to see whats going to happen!
| Becca Malfoy chapter 5 . 8/20/2010
haha I love chapter 4. monkeys rock! I really want more Draco scene please if you couldn't tell by my name I am the future mrs. malfoy (i don't know how that is possible yet lol)I am going to keep reading! keep up the good work
| RebeccaSeverusSnape chapter 17 . 8/20/2010
Oh yey another chappie!
Great job, well done and I can't wait for the next update, I look forward to reading it :)
| RebeccaSeverusSnape chapter 16 . 8/16/2010
I really like this story so far! I love the overall story plot, it's very interesting to read.
This bit made me giggle; 'Of course it didn't work; I thought resentfully. My brain is broken.' Haha, I love the little bits of humour that you include.
Please update soon, im really looking forward to reading more :)
| meandthedoctor chapter 1 . 8/16/2010
ive only read the prologue and... wow. you have such a mature style of writing, and youve really captured the style of rita skeeter, and how i imagine she would write an article. i like the little bits of wizarding history - i have no idea if its true to the potter world, but even if not, it is an interesting snippet of information! - and the names seem magical in themselves. if anything, i have problems with coming up with family names of wizards, but youve done it really well!
ok, im gonna go and carry on reading this now! its really good, and i cant wait to find out whats going to happen! :)
| snape011997 chapter 15 . 8/13/2010
I love this story so much ! it's so well written and I love how you portray snape. you do such a good job! I can't wait to read the rest, it's gonna be just as amazing! :)
| Dave T chapter 14 . 8/6/2010
comment for ben potter: ok ben here's the thing...i am standing up for you on this one. alex is pretty hot. i hate to admit it but i have read twilight and really liked it. bella swan used to be my fictional crush but now i think it is alex snape. she is a good character and by the looks of it a good kisser, i kind of wish i was malfoy. wow i sound pathetic. i am going to stop writing now.
| lovedracomalfoy chapter 14 . 8/6/2010
good job luv it. i can't wait to see what happens next and what snape will do next time he sees her!
| Oh-look-a-quarter chapter 14 . 8/5/2010
I looove the chapter. my only coment is I believe professor sprout is pomona, and madam pomfrey is poppy.
| piper chapter 1 . 8/3/2010
I think you are a good writer. Maybe a little obsessed with Snape, but nonetheless a good writer.
| Lady Ya Ya chapter 2 . 8/3/2010
You are an outstanding author. If your book were published I would be the first in line to purchase it. I think that J.K. Rowling has met her match.