|Reviews for Absent|
| dragoncreators chapter 2 . 4/28/2016
This chapter was halarious. Fantastically written, deep characterizations and a wonderful plot. I love your Professor, he's driven and has good lab etiquette and grasp on procedure, despite the 'virus' being a mess of contradictions and mis-used terms XD
I love it! It had such good flow I feel like I watched an awesome sci-fi drama/family movie (I read the whole thing, I just came back to this chapter.) Please keep writing, I would love to see your name on an original story someday, for you sure do master writing already!
| 8annie81 chapter 3 . 2/15/2014
Dexter has met Demongo? Where have I been!? Did I miss a story?
Ah fluffy ending.
| 8annie81 chapter 2 . 2/15/2014
The Morton he's a badass by name.
Call Utonium! Call quick!
Did this plot really come from you 'forgetting' to have Utonium in Taken or have you been planning it that way since you started?
| 8annie81 chapter 1 . 2/15/2014
Woot! Shaans getting it done! Even Mandy is impressed :)
Oh but poor Professur. He hasn't heard from earth in a week. I could never be an astronaut. Space is way too vast for me to feel confident up there. Here's to hoping Utonium and Morton get home lickety split!
| shyd1 chapter 3 . 11/24/2010
Awww, paternal love fuzziness!
Also loved the BenBen!
| alienphantom chapter 3 . 8/16/2010
*Clapping* Very well done,I must say. Very well done.
| Atrum Phasmatis chapter 3 . 8/1/2010
I'm back again! After reading this fic, I wanted to do several things. First off, I want to slap Max over the head! I know that the Highbreeds are an important ally, and he was trying to think of the big picture, but still! Keeping a father out of touch with his injured son! Despicable.
Speaking of Highbreeds, I want to complement you on how you seamlessly sew the worlds together. Quite amazing, and something not many people can do.
For me, the story was kind of short. Granted, I usually like to read 20k stories, and I get really excited when I find a 100k story I like (rare, but it happens). Also, this story couldn't have been longer. Sure, you could probably stretch it out for another couple thousand words, but it would be just that. A stretch. It would lose some of its goodness to the added length.
I was trying to think of a way to make the story better, but I don't think it could be. At first, I thought the end. Maybe adjust some of the words and have the final phrase be "I know." But then, I realized how cliche that would be, and the way you wrote it is so much better than the typical ending.
Once again, great story, and keep up the fabulous work!
| Second daughter of Eve chapter 3 . 7/25/2010
Finally! I thought Max was turning into a Stu. Nice to see he has a fualt. I like the ending, plenty of fluff.
| Kurozaki chapter 3 . 7/20/2010
Why do your stories always leave me crying? It was so moving! XC *cries*
| LuffyMarra chapter 3 . 7/17/2010
This was a GREAT story! I thought the scene with Dexter and the Professor was the sweetest. Boy I'd love to be a fly on the wall when Ben finds out what his Grandpa did. Any chance you might do a little one shot of that happening? Cause Ben WILL NOT be happy. The scene with Buttercup was very cute too. Keep it up!
| Sam chapter 3 . 7/17/2010
You did it! three chapters! In my face! haha!
Love ya in all your alien language non translating self! ;3
| Kavali chapter 3 . 7/17/2010
Epic conclusions, though I do not envy the plumbers, being at the forefront of 2 geniuses and 3 super powered beings ire. I can imagine the term strained will not being to describe that working relationship
| ZodiacSnake chapter 3 . 7/17/2010
Awwwwww thats so sweet & sad poor both of them!
i really liked the way u rapped this up m& cant wait to see how the sequal comeing out whenever it dose. also event with Demongo? id guess that ties in to story & y hes in Japan as well that i am also very eager to read that sounds interesting!
| secretsocieties chapter 3 . 7/17/2010
I pity Max Tennyson; it will be hard to keep a secret the fact that he (betrayed) didn't tell the Professor about Dexter. Will there be a sequel? (Please say yes, please say yes!)
| Brandon chapter 3 . 7/17/2010
Sorry about that just trying to make it simpler for those of us who failed alien languages class. Futher more I'd like to defend Max and the rest of the Plumbers position, they were faced with a impossible choice Dexter's life or the life of the Highbreed and while it's still wrong that they with held the truth thousands of lives were at stake either way and the Professor was already in the position to save the Highbreed.