Reviews for Harry Potter And The Aspects Of Death
Rangle chapter 7 . 1/15/2018
Dumbledore finally managed to find a ritual to conquer death and in the process enslaving Harry as his boy toy. The end.
The Whimsical Ermine chapter 12 . 1/8/2018
Pretty funny
Yuna chapter 9 . 1/4/2018
It is a bit overkill that Harry has a living trunk, or likes 'fresh ingredients' more...
Of course two marvellous ideas to come up with xD splendid
Yuna chapter 3 . 1/4/2018
Osiris is the god of the dead and the afterlife, Anubis is the god of mummification and death rites...
Also I highly doubt that an egyptian priesg would have an ankh on his head...
Also you shouldn't mark thoughts with "..." just write in the third person, not what he thinks, but as a sentence (I hope you get what I am trying to say, english isn't my native language, if you don't understand, just read other fanfictions to see what they do different while writing...

(To be honest you are better than I am, I know what I want to write, I know the story, but I just can't form the sentences
to be interesting and such...)
the clear rabit chapter 1 . 1/4/2018
When will you update this story?
embrewing chapter 11 . 12/24/2017
ever since reading worm petunia's nickname has definitely taken a darker turn for me.
Prisci chapter 12 . 12/11/2017
Hola saludos , espero que continĂșes la historia porfis
WhiteEagle1985 chapter 12 . 11/15/2017
An awesome story so far! Looking forward to reading more!
fyrewolf5 chapter 12 . 10/23/2017
Rereading stories, and figured I'd see if i could help the muse along. First, if there is any eventual shipping, the only two options I can think of would be Luna Lovegood, since her father wasn't phased by the trunk nearly eating someone, she's the only person i can think of that wouldn't be bothered by him. That or making someone else essentially immortal in a way that doesn't offend him. Maybe Hermione's polyjuice accident had dryad bark added, could probably pull that for anyone you want, but I've always been partial to those two, especially together, gives him a nice balance of logic and whimsy. And while I think he could be in any of the houses, this one seems more along the lines of the all knowing raven, until annoyed, then definitely a lion, just ask those vampires that annoyed him. I'd guess peeves takes one look at Harry, screams like a 5 year old girl, and runs out of the school until Harry graduates, or at least tries, seems like Harry may not be fond of ghosts, from your paris comment. So depending on if he is informed of the ghosts importance to the school before meeting them, would decide if he banishes them on site or not. Binns I can see going a few ways, either he's banished on principle, or since death is patient he may actually find the classes interesting since the monotone wouldn't put him to sleep. Or maybe binns is kept around since that's the only thing that puts Harry to sleep, and he likes the novelty of it. On the animals sensing death and being offput by it, that could cause interesting behavior from mcgonagal, depending on how much the animagus form affects their human form, skeeter may have been an exception on the platform since beetles may have a harder time really comprehending death. And that brings in interesting ideas for when harry finally meets fawkes, the straightforward option of killing dumbles to free the bird, or sneaking in and freeing fawkes without anyone knowing, then watching dumbles try to cover up his missing pheonix, after all what would it say about the leader of the light, if he has lost his pheonix. Then there's also how long draco can resist being a ponce and going against his father's orders and antagonizing Harry.
Guest chapter 12 . 10/17/2017
This story is funny, you should continue it!
automaton14 chapter 7 . 10/14/2017
This chapter was much better than the others so far, which is saying something, because the others are good. Hope you pick this up again.
SnowWolf43 chapter 12 . 9/5/2017
Why dear god did you stop I'm falling in love with each chapter I read. Plese come back and finish plese
Jostanos chapter 12 . 9/5/2017
Harry hasn't met Hagrid before, Michael. He disappeared from Godric's Hollow shortly before the Gentle Giant, and White bee, arrived, and reappeared in Death's Realm to learn how to 'Master Death'.

Hmm... I'm not so sure if Harry can be sorted. If he is... it may be to an as yet unknown fifth house.. 'Avalon' (like in a couple other stories), 'Death' (cliche, telling, and obvious), or 'Thestral' ( *shrugs* Why not?)

Binns may be 'sent on'. Peeves? not sure.
Random animals (not including professors in their animagus forms, Padfoot, and Mooney) may be eaten by Trunk/Crow, or used as 'fresh potions ingredients'.
Jostanos chapter 8 . 9/5/2017
"I am vengence! I am the night! I am... Harry Potter, Master of Death, at your (funeral) service." ~ Batman phrase parody.
Jostanos chapter 6 . 9/5/2017
As a wise acre once exclaimed: "LET THE GAMES BEGIN!"
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