Reviews for unsafe safe 2000 chapter 1 . 8/3/2015
I don't even know where to begin. I guess I'll start here: you are an incredible writer. Truly. The way you captured the fine line between Cat's fantasy world and reality was something experts still struggle with. And yet you still managed to write it beautifully. The words just seemed to flow, one into the other, effortlessly. I found myself mesmerized and heartbroken at the same time. You gave wonderful insight on what could have been Cat Valentine's background and I commend you for that. It was insanely interesting. Please don't ever stop writing. xoxo
UndressTheseBeautifulLies chapter 1 . 2/5/2014
Words fail ME! My god, this was so beautifully written and a lovely plot.
mayawolfie chapter 1 . 9/12/2013
I read this story for the first time a couple years back, and since then it has stuck with me and make me think. I've come back once or twice to re-read it, and its still one of the prettiest stories I've ever read. Its so descriptive! Really, its hard to find an author like you. Don't stop writing, ever.
Guest chapter 1 . 8/2/2013
This was so beautiful. Love how you gave her exact age, really shows the importance of each day of her life, the little moments, not just the birthdays and holidays.
I wish you explored the Bat friendship more, maybe in a different fic. This one was crazy and wild and confusing, just like Cat, and that was good. But maybe you could write a sequel or supplement fic to explain their friendship.
Anyways, this was amazing. One of the best written stories I've ever read. Loved it. :)
Suspended Disbelief chapter 1 . 7/18/2011
This was beautiful and touching.

Let me start off by saying that for some reason Cat has always been my favorite. She is often written off as ditsy or stupid, but I've never really gotten that from her character.

You had me at the first paragraph. It seems that you've really managed to capture her character and all angles of her story. "I'm making happiness." was a line that I could truly imagine her saying. It was smart to show us parts of her childhood. The part when she was eleven and twelve were all really heartbreaking. I teared up too many times to count, and it is rare for me to cry while reading a fic. This is really well written, creative, and is definitely one of my favorite stories.
Susie.Donym chapter 1 . 6/4/2011
WOW. Honestly, that is one of the best written fictions I have read in a long time. Fantastic.
Drunk Off Aqueous Martinis chapter 1 . 1/7/2011
I was searching up some Cat angst because I was in an angsty mood and Cat's my favorite character. So I found this. And I read it because I adore Bat. And I kid you not, when I read the prom paragraphs, shivers went up my spine. Literally, there was this chill on my back. It was so touching, when Beck came up and was so worried about her, and how she's so broken and crazy that she mixed her vodka with sequins from her purse. And then she loses herself to this fairytale world, which is just so Cat, y'know?

Usually when I read angst, I end up disappointed. They're either too short or have all those confusing italics and bolds or they're not REALLY angst. However, I came away from this story with my angst craving satisfied. Bravo.
Great story but chapter 1 . 11/17/2010
Cat's actually the OLDER sibbling not the younger
BelowAverageGatsby chapter 1 . 11/10/2010
This was amazing. Beautifully written, I'm extremely impressed. I loved it.
youwonttakemeaway chapter 1 . 10/7/2010
this is so effing beautiful 3 ILOVEYOU!

fool's blood chapter 1 . 9/7/2010
I suck at reviewing but


this is amazing.

I like how you just made every quirk about her so deep and meaningful. my favorite parts were the road-trip and the prom. I definitely support cat/beck, so I really enjoyed all their moments in this fic.
elitemassacre6 chapter 1 . 8/6/2010
Wow. Wow. Amazing job. I want to ask how you know cat so well, or how you became such a great writer, but it doesn't matter, thank you for that one.
seemslikeaporno chapter 1 . 7/17/2010
wow - this was so beautiful. i like the way you portrayed cat as sort of a girl that loved to laugh because she didn't know what else to do. she's so broken and different and so-secretly-sad in this story, and it ties together beautifully. i do like the hint of beck in there, as well, although I don't really support the pairing. ;) he's just a prince charming for all, isn't he? heee. :)

but, yes, this was completely gorgeous, and near the end, i just wanted to cry. i love your comparisons, too.

awesome, awesome job.
souvenirs chapter 1 . 7/17/2010
Wow. This was so lovely and beautiful and heartbreaking. You gave Cat so much depth and took all these little things about her and made them so much more. This was absolutely breathtakingly wonderful and I loved every word of it.
stargirl interlude chapter 1 . 7/17/2010

that was my first reaction to this. it was beautiful. moving, even. i love this SO EFFING MUCH. and of course, the BeckCat wasn't too bad either. ;)

i adored this. 33
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