Reviews for Luminosity |
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FanGirl chapter 6 . 3/30 How does Dr. Cullen have so much money? Finally Edward and Bella had a conversation. Who rang the doorbell? |
FanGirl chapter 5 . 3/28 Alice saved Bella. |
FanGirl chapter 4 . 3/28 Angela is great. How much money does a Volvo cost? Charlie thinks well of the Cullen family. I want to see snow too. Why is Alice talking to Bella? |
FanGirl chapter 3 . 3/28 Mike is too friendly. |
FanGirl chapter 2 . 3/28 It rains a lot in Forks. Bella really hates interruptions. Xeroscaping sounds interesting. Bella is going to sit next to Edward in Biology. |
FanGirl chapter 1 . 3/28 Everyone makes mistakes. Bella loves her mother very much. It was nice of Charlie to buy Bella a car. I hate gossip. |
MsLiss chapter 57 . 3/8 Somehow I don’t think Edward is dead Bc she would feel it more accurately And maybe the vision from Elsie is more recent than Bella realised. Or maybe it’s wishful thinking in my part lol Thanks |
MsLiss chapter 26 . 3/7 lol Love Bella’s brain |
MsLiss chapter 25 . 3/7 Bella is diabolical Lol |
MsLiss chapter 10 . 3/7 I live this Bella’s brain Delightful |
sparksfly321 chapter 57 . 4/3/2023 Wow…I first read this a while ago after seeing it on the HPMOR subreddit and upon re-reading it I realized I forgot a lot of stuff. I read this knowing the premise was of a less cowardly and weak Bella. This didn’t disappoint! This Bella is a far better version than the original. It’s funny how most Twilight fanfics are actually better than actual books and this one being the highlight of them. Would’ve definitely loved this to be canon. |
JoyHazelAnderson chapter 57 . 10/3/2022 Wow (In a good way) |
lynettecullen chapter 11 . 1/4/2022 I will not make my way to that website because the interface and design looks like MySpace. |
Melted Anchovy chapter 21 . 10/1/2021 I don't like the fact that she's going to try bringing people into the supernatural world without their consent. Let the wolves naturally shift if they have to, but she doesn't know the downsides of being a wolf. |
riddle1rave chapter 19 . 3/24/2021 I CANNOT believe I never spotted that connection between Vampire Bella and Carlisle- that they both knew about vampires before being turned and managed to kill 0 humans. I'm starting to really like logical Bella. |