Reviews for Those Within
Lucky's Girl chapter 1 . 3/14/2014
Hi,
Oh very nice! This definitely was a great one shot! I loved why he was thinking all that and everything. Hope to see more like it! Thanks!
Lucky
with vine leaves in his hair chapter 1 . 7/13/2010
When I finished reading this, I had a lump in my throat.

This was a very interesting read and I felt bad about Hohenheim having all those voices in his head. How he maintained sanity, I don't know.

Probably the saddest part was when he thought about the Homunculus not having a mother and a father to teach him what's right and what's wrong. Though, come to think of it, there are many children that are the same. You know what I just realized? Most of the villains (in real world and fiction) are orphans. However, most heroes are the same too.
Illidan the Half Demon chapter 1 . 7/13/2010
Very touching. You have to feel bad for Hohenheim having all of those souls within him, knowing exactly what he was doing and thinking every moment of the day. At least some, if not most, understood him and let him be. But this was a beautiful one-shot for Hohenheim and Trisha together. Excellent work!