Reviews for The Baby
Fallow52 chapter 3 . 8/18
Kudos :)
Admirer chapter 1 . 7/19
You're all true. I still don't understand why Harry just accepted Ron's apology which wasn't even an apologize. He just stated the most obvious thing. JKR thought about killing Ron in the middle of the books and I'm wondering why she didn't.
Karatekid-Ninja chapter 3 . 7/18
I really loved the story I thought it needed to be a little longer but still good story :)
FyreVixen chapter 3 . 6/25
Order of Weasley's that I like best (1 favorite 8 hate)(based on books and movies):
1. Ginny (Always liked Ginny)
2. Fred & George
3. Molly
4. Bill & Charlie (tied, not twins)
5. Arthur
6. Percy
7. Ron (Always hated Ron)
Great story except Ginny dies (
The Ghostly Minion chapter 3 . 5/19
As expected, a typical broomstick ending, a bit too terse, perhaps, there certainly could have been more details, but that really wasn't her style; she'd let you see conclusions and allow you the pleasure of imagining how you got there.

In her stories, she had Dudley end with Mandy at least a couple times, this time with Millicent.

On loose end that wasn't tied up is Bill and Charlie. One hopes they got theirs. One also hope that Fleur and her family didn't get caught up in the war too.

We'll miss her.

The Ghostly Minion chapter 2 . 5/19
About as black a plot as ever she had the Weasleys and Dumbledore do. While some back story would be nice, Broomstick tended to be a bit sparse on such details.

The Ghostly Minion chapter 1 . 5/19
This is a very strong start to a story.

Harry clearly doesn't like Ron, not that there should be a surprise there; any rational person would treat him as an untrustworthy traitor. And apparently, Ginny is no better.

When this infant arrives, well Harry tells it like it is and you have to wonder what is wrong with Hermione: this is the full 'Sixth year conundrum' back full force. The big question is why Hermione does this.

Her reaction when he confesses his feelings for her are more like Ron than Hermione; say 'A', she says not 'A'. She isn't being rational in any sense at all.

Her parents' response is great. If Hermione wants to stay with Ron, that's her choice, but she'll receive no support from them.

If Harry keeps her and rear as his own, he'll have to evict Ron.

That they notice the letter so late in the game tells you just how shaken they are.

Big developments next.

Araytigre chapter 3 . 5/7
Wow, this was good! It would be shocking to come home from a day out on the town and find a baby on your porch, and then find out it belongs not only your virgin child, but also to her best friend whom is also a virgin And Never had Any physical relationship with her. I did like Harry's solution with the Weasley's, Dumbledore and Snape. I did wonder who is running Hogwarts for them, and whether or not they fired Binns. Thank You. TTFN
moonprincess97524 chapter 3 . 1/12
This is a very different way of Harry and Hermione becoming parents for the first time, I have to say that I love your inventive ideas. Wonderful story.
Mari Wollsch chapter 3 . 1/1
super xxxxxxxxxx
kdakmmt chapter 3 . 11/23/2014
A sniper rifle with space expanded clip of HE rounds would have cured alot of the ails in the wizarding world. Very good story.
Arial Wolf chapter 3 . 11/12/2014
Brilliant thank you
Rat chapter 1 . 10/8/2014
Ron and Hermione should never have been an item.
Slytherin Princess34 chapter 3 . 10/5/2014
Not bad :D
Jharry1960 chapter 3 . 9/24/2014
I do like this story but I felt it had one shortcoming. I would think that Harry and Hermione would have been grateful to Edna for having saved them from a fate worse than death and for giving them a chance at a life they had not dared to dream of. They certainly should have sought to find her and help her. It just seems out of character for them to have forgotten about her so quickly without a care. Edna was the true hero of this story but she gets a fraction of the goodness of life due her. At least the Potters remembered her for naming purposes but it seems pretty weak, all things considered.
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