|Reviews for Causality Chain|
| bandgsecurtiyaw chapter 21 . 7/19/2013
Very good so far.
| carick of hunter moon chapter 21 . 7/18/2013
It is, a great shame, this is a lost fan-fiction, that has not been update in far to long, as it had potential to be a great story.
| Guest chapter 21 . 3/27/2013
i really like what you've done, i do hope you continue this at some point
| purple sky always chapter 21 . 2/6/2013
Hmm, I wonder what is Regulus's mission. I've always liked his character even though not much information was given about him. In the end, he did what was right and that is all that mattered.
| Anime Princess chapter 5 . 1/28/2013
Where the HELL is Sirius?!
You got Lestrange OUT but NO ONE not even URSULA or CASSIOPEIA thought to get him OUT?!
| Guest chapter 1 . 9/27/2012
Hogarts is in scotland, not england
| xXNovenusPrimeXx chapter 18 . 9/6/2012
'Mon amie' is the feminine version of 'my friend,' 'mon ami' is the masculine form. but this was interesting with the french words, then again I'm taking french so... anyway write on and I am off to read the next chapter.
| jvankessel chapter 6 . 8/27/2012
"That will be 34 Galleons, 12 Sickles and 25 Kunts." He nodded towards Harry.
Oh dear. When you misspell words, you don't mess around, do you? I was laughing out loud.
I like the story too.
| Teufel1987 chapter 12 . 7/19/2012
Wasn't Flamel 665 years old during Harry's first year and about to turn 666?
| Teufel1987 chapter 9 . 7/19/2012
Quite:The muggles have a saying, and I believe that it's said in this world too.:End Quote
How would a pureblood, a person who was raised exclusively in the magical world know what the Muggles say? He dislikes Muggleborn, and is being raised by muggle haters… why would he bother to quote a muggle idiom?
| Guest chapter 21 . 7/2/2012
I am simply in awe of the world you has weaved here. I love the tidbits about alternate universes' key people being rescued and kept safe to serve a greatest/fairest/kindest destiny in this universe you have created. I am glad to read about Regulus being alive here. I always felt for him dying so young after finally finding the truth about Voldie's plans. Such waste! I am now intrigued by Ginny's path turning dark. What happened there? Also, Lucius got the other dark families who were having difficulties to produce more descendence a way to do it so but he and Narcissa only had zero children after Draco? What is his and Narcissa's story? All your plotline is fascinating and I am gleefully waiting for more updates soon. I cannot wait for the chance of read if Dumbles is going to get his just comeuppance for his role in Sirius' imprisonment debacle. Pettigrew confessed he knew about Sirius being not the Potters' Secret Keeper. The judges surely heard that little tidbit, yeah? So, are they going to question him about his silence in the matter years ago? That man tampers with the law however he likes and people do nothing. It is so, so frustrating! Ok, you say the next update will provide a answer to it so I will wait for a new chapter. Thanks again for such great tale!
| Guest chapter 20 . 7/2/2012
I am glad the basilisk was not killed. The poor creature was only hungry and being used by Voldie! I liked Harry helping her to be free again. Hope she will be not found and hunted now! Ginny is defiantly lost now, isn't she? Well, I am worried she will reveal to be a most efficient and loyal servant to Voldemort. Bellatrix-like. Such people are often the most dangerous... and hard to vanquish. Nonetheless, I am interested on read about her plans progressing during the summer. Also, about her chosen family. I am worried her hair colour will be a hint in that regard! Anyhow, I enjoyed your despiction of Slytherin's secret chamber and its ways to access very much. Hope Harry will find tons of interesting books and assorted materials there to strenght his knowledge about the past and to build off the individual and wizard who he will be...
| Guest chapter 19 . 7/2/2012
My word, your story gets more interesting each time a new chapter is updated! I love the tidbits and hints about the Unspeakables' secret work concerning Harry and the Wizarding World's salvation. I was absolutely fascinated by the bits about alternate universes wherein things had gone to the Dodo's way. It related well to my own musings about canon's ending (aka epilogue) showing no real change in the British Wizarding society despite of a great evil having been vanquished. Prejudices still existed. Dark vs Light division still existed. Pureblood reasonable concerns were still being cheerfully and self-righteous overlooked. The entire society was happily stuck on a status of complacence which well could lead it to extinction via Muggle-ization or to squibness via loss of magical strenght and power level. And the most frustrating of it all was Harry & Co. would think things were gold! Thus, I love your take on this particular concern of mine which I am sure it is shared by you and many others when reading or plotting a new fic wherein wizarding traditions and such have a big role. I find your story is a great example of plot-developing in that way... Again, good work!
| Guest chapter 18 . 7/2/2012
Wow. The insights you offered here on Ginny, Hermione and Shining Star (A. D.?) are astounding and truly fascinating. I enjoy character study very much and you gifted me with an impressive one in this chapter. Thanks! I hope Ginny cannot solidify her plans at the end. I want her happy and living a better life with or without her family but not as someone truly dark or Voldie-infused. I enjoyed also your take on the Weasley family's lifestyle being caused by monetary ruin. And failure of its Heads to procure new ways to keep the family's less-than-buoyant financial status afloat, IMO... Hermione I hope will not gave up too much parts of herself to fit in her new world. It is good she is inmune to her schoolmates' petty shallowness and general shenanigans. It said she is strong where it counts and she will probably be a worthy witch someday. I'll wait for more about her path in life. Thanks for show us how things were going for Hermione in Beauxbatons! I wondered... Oh, Shining Star! I have my suspicions about her identity. And yes, I think it would give Dumbles fits, too if he was to know it. But! Mystery is good for him. He cannot meddle and to ruin things if he is kept ignorant in that front... Great chapter!
| Guest chapter 17 . 7/2/2012
Albus is... there is not words, honestly. I would love someone finding out all those petitions and pleas for help done to him or shut down by him and to get them published in the newspaper or exposed so the wizarding society could finally see what kind of monster he truly is. When I think about your Merope, your Elaine Prince and your Severus, as well as uncountable others, whom Dumbles refused to help and how their lives turned out to be, I am just so incensed! How could he to do things in that way! What his logic reasoning was? God, hope someone stop him soon! In other order of things, I caught a typo. Ginny's name is Ginevra. Not Ginerva. Anyway, I find her descent into darkness very entertaining if a bit sad. Her thoughts about her parents were most accurate, IMO. About her father, specially. I like Arthur (Molly less so. She is overbearing and loud) but it is true he and his wife should have better prepared themselves for support seven children. Basic needs being covered is well and good but children (specially little girls) are entitled to some small comforts of their own too. It should be so not just so escape to certain messure of resentfulness that said children would naturally feel towards so poorly prepared parents but also to it's their right and it is good for their general happiness and content in life. I never understood how a wizard and a witch considered competent as such (they graduated from Hogwarts, after all) could be so unsucessfull in providing their children a better life. I mean, their house was an architectonical nightmare of mismatched furniture and knick-knacks which could have been avoided simply for train to be better in Transfiguration. And it or Charms could be good for mend and beautify clothes, too. Dark or not, Ginny is right about her parents failing to adequately provide for she and her siblings... Hey! I wonder what Ron will say when Ginny show herself to the world as dark and/or renounce her family name in great disdain... Please, do not get her adopted by Malfoys? She is going to be a real threat and I do not want Draco in position to be influenced by the likes of her. Lucius is enough bad example already... I found very interesting the old custom of orphaned wizarding children being adopted by pureblood. It would be great they re-enact it... As always, good work! I stay fascinated by it.