|Reviews for One Day In Hell|
| fjeklsnfisodnlkeflns chapter 1 . 6/30/2012
Excellent work on this one. Your writing style is convincing and appealing. I also appreciate the effort put into emphasizing the personality of each character: Heather's loose, casual personality and Mike"s over reactive and embittered personality. It's always a good quality of a writer when they effectively capture the voice of the character, meaning the reader hears the dialogue in the tone of the character. Overall, well done.
I'll keep my eyes peeled for more Blair Witch fanfics under your name.
| ChocolateChipCookie29 chapter 1 . 9/29/2011
I can't believe this story doesn't haven't any reviews. It's really good, and really sad. I really liked it. :)