Reviews for Love Comes Last
maphie chapter 23 . 5/14/2014
I love this story even the second time around!
maphie chapter 12 . 5/13/2014
Bella is so naive. Young and in love and making the worst choices. Sigh.
Just Sus chapter 24 . 5/3/2014
Thank you for this story! It certainly had its ups and definitely had its downs, but it was a story well told.
I see that you don't have any other stories on your page. I'm sorry to see that, but understand that you went through some very harde times during the telling of this sorry.

I loved this Bella all the way through...Edward, not so much, but he finally got it right!

Thanks, hon! I hope life is treating you kindly! You deserve it...

xoxoSus
Just Sus chapter 22 . 5/3/2014
I know this is a few years past, but I'm so sorry for your loss. Did your Mother survive? My Mama died of leukemia some years ago. I hope life has given you more happiness!
Just Sus chapter 21 . 5/3/2014
I'm kind of surprised about the Carlie part, after Edward's feelings were known about Carlisle. The name is pretty, tho...
Just Sus chapter 20 . 5/2/2014
I've owned and raised Labs most of my life. They are the best dogs, bar none! I loved this...Plus, they are great family, and kid dogs!

Great, happy chapter!
xoSus
Just Sus chapter 18 . 5/2/2014
OK...finally starting to smile, and breathe, here...You really had me going! No birth control? guess it's time for them to have kids anyway, after 5 years together. I'm so happy that he really didn't have an affair with Victoria...*whew*...
Just Sus chapter 17 . 5/2/2014
OMG! YAYAYAYAYAYAYAYYYYYYYY!
Just Sus chapter 16 . 5/2/2014
OK...I've been crying through the last couple of chapters, now I'm bawling like a baby! Goddammit, Edward! Why didn't you tell her before, you royal, stupid ass? She has loved you forever, and you've done nothing but hurt her, and hurt her some more... C'mon, asshole, 'fess up and make her yours!

xoxoSus
Just Sus chapter 14 . 5/2/2014
This makes me cry, thinking how much he hurt Bella. She needs to tell him she's in love with him, before this is over! He's really a bastard...
Just Sus chapter 12 . 5/2/2014
I hate that he doesn't love her, or doesn't think he does. He doesn't seem to even consider that he might be able to in the future...like he's just looking for the next 5 years to be over, and done with. Makes me sad for her...
Just Sus chapter 11 . 5/2/2014
Wow! Must be nice! Who gets this place when they split?
Just Sus chapter 10 . 5/2/2014
Carlisle is a big asshole!
Just Sus chapter 9 . 5/2/2014
I still don't get why he won't sleep with her. He seems to be very sexual, so why not with her? Who's going to be his"wife?" She would do it, I'm sure!
Just Sus chapter 7 . 5/2/2014
What is wrong with him? Why doesn't he love Bella? She obviously loves him...
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