Well written, interesting premise; looking forward to following this! What is a "flat waist"? Do you mean slim?

this story owns me. one of the best.

loved it

hope everything works out for the best for our lovely couple

keep going

can't wait to read the next chapter

Oooh boo on Edward! He said he would never cheat. I never should have believed him... (

Anyway, great story! I started reading this afternoon and am already caught up. Can't wait for more, great job!

I'm really enjoying this concept - and I like that you don't have Bella and Edward all happily ever after after only a few months, like most stories like this do (though I'm glad that it'll happen in the end)! This chapter was painful though. Thanks,

Love Amy xxx

I cried, poor Bella.

I just started reading this and I LOVE IT! it's great except I am sad it stopped when it did! Can't wait to see how this plays out!

This story has now become one of my absolute favorites! I found it rec'd on netracullen's story last night and I read the whole thing in one night! I feel so sad for Bella and I just want to ring Edward's neck ha! Please update soon, the suspense is killing me. I truly felt for Bella when I am reading this and that is due to how well you are writing the characters. I can't wait for the next update :)

Oh my goodness! This story is killing me! Bella's heartbreak had me crying. I'm trying not to guess what you have planned, so that I can feel it as it's happening, but man, this hurts.

Thanks for the update, and this story!

Great story, I love all of it, well, except for the fact that Edward doesn't know that he is in love with Bella... I saw this rec'd on one of the chapter updates I got in the last day, but since there were about 50 of them, I am so sorry not to be able to tell you which one it was... Thanks so much for taking the time to write this for us, can't wait to see what happens next!

Wow, these are some really emotionally charged arguments between Edward and Carlisle. I feel tense just reading them.

Just found tour story on another author's recommendation. Lovin this. You've just got me in a complete heart-fail this morning. Looking forward to the next update.

I do feel for Bella so much. I am almost wishing for the 5 years to come to an end. I know she and Edward had an agreement but clearly he is not as "honorable" as I think he is... Excellent chapter. I like it.

What a tangled mess

Love the story. It was so angsty that I felt that i was going through it. I can't wait for the next update.